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01/10/2009 03:10:24 PM |
the choice of centered crop of the head actually gives this an unbalanced feel - the body seems to be small in comparison to the head - possibly the point but it gives it an odd look |
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01/06/2009 04:43:15 AM |
Composition: I really like this angle. I am not fond of the arm there... assuming you are holding the cam? :)
Lighting/Exposure: Catchlights are nice. The light is harsh on the top of your head though.
Pose: I never really go for a shot where both eyes are on an even line. I like to see just a bit of a head tilt.
Suggestions for Improvements: Room between you and the wall behind you. A shot at f4 or f3.5 would have helped the composition, methinks. Perhaps a bit of diffusion for that light :)
A very nice first portrait for this SC. I am feeling like you are a little angry with the expression :) |
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01/05/2009 10:14:56 PM |
great shot. Head and beard look wonderful. I might come away from the wall a bit so you dont blend is a much. Other thought is the placement of the left arm (yours) is strange. Are you holding the camera? |
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01/04/2009 07:15:34 PM |
very menicing look your giving us! i like it in b.w. |
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01/04/2009 03:58:33 PM |
Would like a little more detail in the shadows, but a cool shot nonetheless! |
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01/04/2009 02:25:08 PM |
I always wanted to shave my head bald. |
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