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01/11/2009 06:05:38 PM |
Critique Club
I have nothing to offer from a technical stand point, other than the area in focus takes away from the overal soft feeling, see below.
To me this is a piece of art, so I will tell you what I like. The composition is fantastic, with the lower portion dominating the initial experience but supported by the moon (at least I view it as a moon). Very soothing, peaceful color with soft contrast. Very well done.
Cheers,
Ben |
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01/02/2009 08:22:18 PM |
love the ephemeral feel to this |
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01/02/2009 05:14:43 PM |
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12/31/2008 03:38:20 PM |
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12/31/2008 11:48:03 AM |
I like it. Reminds me of a poster I saw once. Good. |
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12/31/2008 10:10:14 AM |
Is this a negative? I like the lower part but the dark blue blob (moon) spoils it for me - I'd have cropped it out - good luck |
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12/31/2008 09:23:42 AM |
I think you conveyed the title well, but how did you get an oval moon? |
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12/31/2008 08:10:51 AM |
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12/31/2008 08:04:40 AM |
10 - without a doubt captured the spirit of Asia. Fantastic! |
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12/30/2008 07:53:38 PM |
Everything here seems a little too transparent for me... |
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12/29/2008 12:53:49 PM |
The soft colour and focus look very peaceful. |
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12/29/2008 03:28:23 AM |
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12/28/2008 08:03:25 PM |
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