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12/28/2008 01:40:56 PM |
It needs something more to hold interest -- a child shaking one of the packages, for example. Also, the image is a very noisy. |
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12/28/2008 10:05:24 AM |
A little hazy - maybe it's morning eyes... *rubs eyes* - nope, still hazy. Maybe a touch of contrast adjustment would help. |
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12/27/2008 05:36:03 AM |
very grainy and dull, needs more work with levels and curves |
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12/23/2008 02:57:40 PM |
Pretty packages, but the lighting and composition aren't especially interesting. |
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12/23/2008 11:23:28 AM |
Focus seems a little on the soft side. |
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12/22/2008 11:30:16 AM |
Well, here's my two cents... :) On my screen, this appears a little grainy. Also, I think this could use just a bit more contrast - it looks a little washed out and flat. The boxes are very nicely arranged, and pleasing to the eye, but there isn't much of a composition here. My eyes wander over the photograph. I have no idea what to suggest to fix that though. My only thought would be to try experimenting with some shallow depth of field. Just a thought. :) |
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12/22/2008 11:05:52 AM |
classic, colours seems off and not a great sharpness. |
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12/22/2008 07:43:52 AM |
that's a lot of boxes - i wonder if a bit more contrast in the image would give it a bit more pop |
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12/21/2008 11:07:18 PM |
Very curious to know what ISO you shot this on as it seems very noisey and lacks contrast. Nice idea though. |
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12/21/2008 08:55:09 PM |
Lighting seems a bit flat, colors could pop more. It seems to be suffering from some noise. |
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