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01/03/2009 09:39:44 AM |
Critique Club
First, congratulation on a wonderful photograph and high finish. I love the concept and execution of this image to convey "happy time" for yourself. Good composition with the focal point in the bottom third intersection, strong use of negative space helps to convey your desire for personal time by my interpretation. Colors are vibrant, and not oversaturated.
I do believe you pushed the limit with the sharpening, and in is overdone in my opinion along the rim of the face of the clock and petals.
I like the DOF you chose, but I wonder how this would have looked at f/11, thus bringing the foreground in to greater focus.
I gave this a 6 during voting due to the sharpening. Cleaner processing would have recieved a higher vote from me.
Nice work. Cheers, Ben |
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12/28/2008 01:04:22 PM |
Nice angle and smart, effective lighting. |
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12/28/2008 05:42:16 AM |
Good thought and execution. |
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12/27/2008 12:08:56 PM |
I know the feeling ...
Very well done. |
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12/27/2008 10:01:37 AM |
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12/27/2008 08:44:15 AM |
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12/27/2008 06:26:05 AM |
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12/24/2008 09:15:59 PM |
I wish I could vote on these cause you would get 10 10's just cause you want the same thing as me!! and the shot is awesome!! ~D~ |
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12/24/2008 06:41:56 AM |
Clever, original, well done
Happy Christmas ! |
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12/23/2008 07:07:07 PM |
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12/23/2008 11:17:03 AM |
Great composition and idea! |
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12/23/2008 10:11:18 AM |
Beautifully done. Love the gradient background, the colors, the detail on the face, the concept. Because this is so good, I'll be picky and say it looks like the petals may have been a bit over sharpened. |
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12/22/2008 10:05:49 PM |
your not meant to have time for yourself...christmas is the time for giving? so gimme gimme gimme some time too myself. |
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12/21/2008 07:14:54 PM |
A sentiment I can certainly agree with! |
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