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05/17/2004 07:26:36 PM |
Concept was good, but shot was without definition/clarity. |
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05/16/2004 10:08:54 AM |
this is way too noisy. and the lighing is all wrong. |
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05/16/2004 04:28:29 AM |
I know the background contrast brings out the message of your photo, but I think I'd like a little more differentation between background and foreground would help. |
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05/16/2004 03:39:21 AM |
Cool idea for a picture, I like the idea alot. I think you'll get burned a bit for the noise, looks like you took the picture in very very low lighting. Nice job though... |
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05/15/2004 04:20:16 PM |
Blurry and plain. You could have made this more dynamic by putting the items a little closer together, and using more directional light. |
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05/15/2004 09:14:48 AM |
it could be focused better, and better lighting. |
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05/15/2004 08:13:38 AM |
This is very out of focus and grainy.The composition is static and the horizon line is tilted. |
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05/14/2004 12:39:42 PM |
Black vs. white and war vs. peace - contrasting tones and symbols working together - that's good. Image appears very grainy - I think the contrast apparent in your background detracts from the contrast you've established between your two objects. |
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05/14/2004 11:52:37 AM |
where is the focus? also image is flat... needs more contrast |
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05/14/2004 06:04:42 AM |
The table edge on the right is distracting, and the image is very grainy. Might have also done better from a more interesting angle than head-on. Maybe contrasting the knife against the flag. |
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05/14/2004 05:28:17 AM |
The elements in this photo look blurry. There is too much gray/white in this photo for my taste- it makes everything look dull. |
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05/13/2004 01:07:03 PM |
Looks rather grainy, and out of focus |
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05/13/2004 11:02:13 AM |
Better focus could have improved this. |
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05/13/2004 09:44:50 AM |
Having both objects leaning over to the right rather upsets the impact you were obviously trying for. An interesting image otherwise. |
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05/13/2004 08:59:48 AM |
This picture is poorly lit, out of focus, dully composed. What's the white thing -- a surrender flag? Are they stuck to some sort of table? Why? There's no dynamic tension in the picture. |
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05/13/2004 08:33:52 AM |
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05/12/2004 10:15:24 PM |
is it supposed to be so blurry? awful lot of negative space. |
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05/12/2004 07:25:35 PM |
Good choice of opposites. There is too much negative space, its out of focus, and there really doesn't seem to be any detail in the knife. I would like to see you rework this idea with a little more creativity. 3 |
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05/12/2004 03:36:28 PM |
My suggestion for imporvement here would be less of a staged look. This is just a boring set up and needs something else to help it connect. A hat, tank, better background, tree branch, army men...etc. Maybe the knife on the flag....? The noise is distracting from the shot. ?More light and a lower ISO for less noise. Best of luck in the challenge. |
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05/12/2004 11:52:18 AM |
This photograph is so poorly done I can't imagine why you ever submitted it to the contest. Not only is it out of focus and grainy, but it is so uninspiring as to be brain-deadening. A knife near a white flag... The lighting is terrible, there is virtually no contrast in this photo, and the composition is so ill-conceived as to be mind-boggling. There is nothing interesting about this photograph whatsoever. Please don't waste our time posting photos like this. |
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05/12/2004 09:49:46 AM |
Interesting idea, not a very good shot though. Sorry, out of focus, grainy and nothing to really hold my attention. A 2 |
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05/12/2004 09:14:01 AM |
The granularity and lack of focus hurt this good idea. And toilet paper is a strange choice of flag materiel. |
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05/12/2004 09:10:10 AM |
Is this taken from a cell phone camera? The grain and noise is very extreme. If it's a regular digital, you may want to reduce the ISO to 80 or 100 at the very least. This also doesn't look in focus. |
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05/11/2004 08:18:13 PM |
noisy and out of focus. good idea otherwise. |
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05/11/2004 08:14:50 PM |
Great idea, but the quality is unfortunately not up to par. with better quality, this image would be amazing. 8. |
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