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05/11/2004 09:55:27 AM |
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05/11/2004 07:05:46 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
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05/11/2004 03:46:35 AM |
| You should have cropped your image closer around your subject and eliminated the building which is distracting. |
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05/10/2004 04:42:33 PM |
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05/10/2004 12:42:59 PM |
| a lot of negative space. sometimes that works nicely. I think in this case, not enough contrast in color. a good idea though. the dish seems a little out of focus also. I think cropping out the structure in the distance would imrove the shot quite a bit. that also may improve the negative space thing you've got going. |
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05/10/2004 10:00:39 AM |
| Could you have cropped out the lower bldg. and so the dish w/ rust totally dominated the photo? |
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05/10/2004 03:46:43 AM |
| Lovely shot, although the building in the background.. hmm not sure if it adds to the composition, If it was all negative space I would've been happier. 7 |
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05/09/2004 10:15:07 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/07/2004 03:59:05 PM |
| not sure building at bottom helps |
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05/07/2004 03:20:10 PM |
| I find the house in the background a bit distracting |
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05/06/2004 09:34:22 PM |
| Interesting rust picture, colors are good and well focused. To my eyes, it might have been better with a closer crop, with less sky and perhaps no building. |
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05/06/2004 04:51:27 AM |
needs a bit more contrast
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05/05/2004 08:01:17 AM |
| Nice to be reminded of the speed of rust by the use of decayed new tech. The smog helps make the point of where our priorities are. Unfortunately there seems to be two pictures instead of one. The building in the background is too incompletely represented to have a place in the photo. |
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05/04/2004 09:17:49 PM |
| Nice use of negative space. I'd like to see a blue sky too help make the rust even more vivid. |
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