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12/11/2008 04:27:14 PM |
Funny and original shot. If you ever need help for all of that food, just call me. It looks tasty. Great image! |
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12/09/2008 08:08:02 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
First of all well done on 11th place.
My first impression of this pic is that it is very busy. I personally found it had too many things to look at and this made it hard to look at.
So, from a compositional point of view, I feel it would have worked better without so many things on the table. The random wine glass doesn't add much to the composition. If you had taken a step to the right, you may have avoided the white curtain and the pitcher that are creeping into the right frame. By doing that you would also have got more of the cello in the background which would, I think have worked well.
To me it looks like it is not really properly focused and that you have used the clarity slider a little bit too much to try to compensate when converting the file (via ACR). If you haven't done this, then I'm sorry, but this is what it looks like to me. I also am seeing a slight yellow colour cast in the image, but that may just be my monitor.
I think you should be pleased with the score you got. Others clearly disagree with my point of view, which is all this is. :)
Regards
Sarah
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12/05/2008 08:40:35 PM |
Wonderfully done image; deserves a higher score! |
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12/05/2008 11:38:14 AM |
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12/03/2008 07:10:17 PM |
Do I need glasses (possibly) or is this not quite in focus? |
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12/03/2008 12:14:11 PM |
His name must be Gorge, I mean George... |
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12/03/2008 05:35:07 AM |
well someone looks like they are having fun, nice angle and DOF, good colours |
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12/03/2008 03:55:28 AM |
This is the most original and at the same time funniest entry of the lot.
Is that Flint Eatsgood? 10 |
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12/03/2008 03:00:36 AM |
Wine, beer and a cello? Nice lighting. |
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12/01/2008 07:42:12 AM |
Definitely wouldn't call you overweight ;-) Hope you enjoyed your feast. |
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11/30/2008 10:17:43 AM |
looks like a great meal. All around good shot. |
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11/30/2008 07:31:06 AM |
I would drop the hat, lose the beer and the margarine, and iron the shirt. I like how the rolls or whatever that is in the foreground looks. I would have like to have seen more of the cello? in the shot and maybe a little more refined look. Also would have panned to the left some to omit the white curtain in the background. |
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11/29/2008 11:13:05 PM |
Damn straight! Just because nobody is coming over shouldn't stop you from having a HUGE feast and eat it all yourself! Right on! :) |
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11/29/2008 01:53:19 PM |
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11/29/2008 01:39:19 PM |
those rolls look excellent. Not so sure I'd want you to pass the stuffing. |
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11/29/2008 12:14:51 PM |
Love the title! Man there's no shortage of stuff for him to choose from now is there? 9 |
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11/29/2008 05:56:38 AM |
Great composition! Looks like it's all about him! LOL!!! 6 |
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11/29/2008 04:37:29 AM |
Ever heard of a knife? You're going to choke on that! |
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11/29/2008 02:24:34 AM |
Good POV and I like the way he's giving the thumb's up ! Is that a cello in the background? After dinner music? ;) |
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11/28/2008 10:33:09 PM |
Wow! Someone's going to be sleeping that off for a couple of days... |
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11/28/2008 08:12:24 PM |
A meal fit for a king. I like the wide angle distortion. |
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11/28/2008 07:21:40 PM |
i like the bass in the background:) i suggest moving the photo in the background next time |
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