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08/13/2010 03:26:11 AM |
Nice job on a unique idea. |
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10/22/2009 01:42:39 PM |
Very nicely done. I'm going to try this out one day. Thanks for the motivation. :) |
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12/29/2008 07:16:31 AM |
i love the glow this generates. very well done:) makes me really want to go try a kiwi shot |
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12/12/2008 05:47:47 AM |
Many thanks Eric - most helpful. |
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12/08/2008 09:22:14 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
So, its been a really big week for you. Just a few days ago, this was your new personal best, both in score and challenge placement. Then, you had to go and outdo yourself and pull in a ribbon. Nice work.
Camera Work/Technical: Your focus is spot on and exactly where it needs to be. This is one of the major strengths of the image. I also like the tones that you captured. The brightness of the green does nicely against the darkness of the background.
Lighting: Superb. Hollowing out the kiwi did wonders for the lightning.
Composition/Content: I like the composition, but the content is a bit too common for my personal preference. Search kiwi on the site photos and you'll find lots of these. However, your composition shows a more creativity than most, and you captured this one better than most of the others that I looked at while thinking about your image.
My Opinion: I think that the 6.35 is about right for this capture. A top 15 placement is fitting looking at the rest of the challenge entries, and this is one of the better fruit shots in the challenge. Nice work in pulling of a fine image with fairly common subject matter. If I had voted on this challenge, this would have been in the 6 or 7 range. You met the challenge well.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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12/03/2008 06:21:24 AM |
This is really fabulous, love the "glowing from within" look. Congrats on top 20. |
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11/29/2008 02:41:47 AM |
Thats simply wonderful 10 from me. |
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11/28/2008 03:08:34 AM |
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11/26/2008 11:29:20 AM |
Now this is creative! I've seen lots of photos of thinly sliced fruit but to keep the fruit almost whole and then backlight it is different. |
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11/26/2008 11:27:14 AM |
That's cool. I assume you must have had to cut away much of the backside of the kiwi to get the light through. Nice effect. |
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11/25/2008 09:09:16 PM |
I have an idea about how you did this, but pray do post!!! |
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11/25/2008 07:27:57 PM |
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