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11/17/2008 07:29:17 PM |
Enjoy the coal/diamond - dark/light - 7 |
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11/15/2008 01:15:48 PM |
I love the concept, but I'm not sure the focus and lighting work for me. I can't put my finger on exactly why, but the extremely shallow DoF might be the culprit. I really love the OoF diamonds in the lower left though! They just look cool! |
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11/14/2008 03:54:44 PM |
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11/14/2008 02:47:46 PM |
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11/14/2008 12:32:55 AM |
Ok, here's my cc :)
The contrast of the black coal against the shiny sparkly diamonds is great. There are a couple of things that bother me a little, the grey background is a little, well, grey! Maybe a crisp white background may have worked a little better.
The oof diamonds at the bottom left draw my eye a bit, though I am not a big fan of foreground bokeh, personally I'd have probably left them out of the shot. I do really like the angle they are at though so maybe just a larger dof (though I guess you used the macro tube) to keep them sharper and maybe not cutting any of the diamond off. |
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11/13/2008 10:16:32 AM |
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11/12/2008 10:46:04 AM |
An ok composition but maybe slightly tight crop. The two 'diamonds' on the left facing same direction should not have been there as it just makes it look messy. |
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11/12/2008 04:57:13 AM |
Where's the nanotube or buckyball? Nice picture |
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11/11/2008 01:54:49 PM |
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11/11/2008 11:39:58 AM |
Wow...to have that many! It's so difficult to get a shot like this, isn't it? |
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11/11/2008 06:22:25 AM |
Hi Janna! I think this is an excellent shot for the challenge. Nicely thought out, well laid out, good use of the elements, and a great title for the shot as well. I like the out of focus diamonds in the foreground, but there are some voters that don't like anything blurred - can't please 'em all. The only techical nits I can find are the sections of too-bright reflection on the three prominent diamonds, particularly the top one. You'll have to ask after the challenge, but I think in advanced you could have cloned a bit to reduce that blown out section. It's terribly hard to avoid bright spots on diamonds because of the facets - at least one is going to be facing a light source in some way - that's what makes them sparkle, after all. The only other thing I can think of is maybe making the background a less dullish color. Blue or white would be good. All in all, I think you did a great job with this! |
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