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09/15/2008 05:22:47 AM |
Hi Barry,
I think your intention with size reduction had really done the photo a huge disfavor here!
What I like about the photo:
- As a product shot, I think there is consideration for the stage setting. I can see this in an advert spread or in a magazine page.
- I like the use of burlap. It's a good choice of background and allow the subject to blend into the image.
What could have been improved:
- Unlike your other execution of a clean sharp image like:
the blur effect makes the photo a little "out of focus" as a whole. I'm sure The original version would had been much better.
- The cropping is a little tight on top, bottom and right, making it tougher for a full bleed usage.
Hope this helps.
Cheers
Eric |
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09/15/2008 05:01:59 AM |
I like the background; I think it goes well with the product. I also like the composition. One small nitpick--the out-of-focus yellow lid is drawing my eye. |
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09/12/2008 11:52:36 AM |
Very clear, the nuts look tasty and fresh, good for an ad. Not so sure I like the background material though. |
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09/12/2008 10:24:57 AM |
Mmm mmm. Burlap really works better than a plain Jane backdrop! WB is a bit too warm I think (others will surely disagree though!). |
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09/11/2008 06:07:53 PM |
T think that I would like to have seen the can straight verticallywhat are the green ones in the front (not appealing) |
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09/10/2008 03:48:24 PM |
ooh yummy, and good use of burlap as a bg, adds texture, depth and interest. 7 |
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09/10/2008 01:36:41 PM |
Great shot! Only suggestion is to get more of an upward shot. |
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09/09/2008 02:55:29 PM |
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09/09/2008 01:39:19 PM |
Burlap is a great choice for background here. :) |
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09/09/2008 10:30:58 AM |
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09/09/2008 05:31:49 AM |
I love the use of burlap(?) for the background. |
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09/08/2008 09:31:39 AM |
good background choice. a bit more contrast might have helped this a bit more |
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09/07/2008 09:25:51 PM |
The background doesn't help this one at all |
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09/07/2008 08:51:19 PM |
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