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09/15/2008 11:19:36 AM |
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!
First of all I want to say that I love the beautiful b/w tones you used here. The high contrast makes it very dramatic. Light looks good.
Some things I'd change on this one. The composition could've been better, maybe a landscape orientated photo with negative space at the left would've solved that. Also I'd play around a bit with the broom and doll, but I don't know what you've been trying :) |
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09/06/2008 03:17:40 PM |
Nice. This would be very cool framed. There is a sense of desperation here combined with loss or something. |
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09/06/2008 08:16:17 AM |
Great picture and did the right thing by not cropping the broom handle. One of the best in this batch. Nice! |
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09/05/2008 11:31:26 AM |
brush should be other colour, it draws away the attention. (8) |
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09/05/2008 10:08:21 AM |
Stark and moody. Great contrast & light. 7 |
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09/05/2008 06:04:52 AM |
interesting composition... i like the choice of high-contrast and darker grungy feel to the image it works :-) |
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09/04/2008 01:14:06 PM |
Great Idea. I wish there was a dust pan too. Great photo, Truly unique |
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09/04/2008 11:15:03 AM |
I'm not sure I understand the title with the photo but it's a good shot, I like the crop. |
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09/03/2008 03:40:13 AM |
Nice idea and good use og B&W. I would have liked better focus on the doll. |
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