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10/21/2002 04:44:00 AM |
The concept was nice... but my execution... lousy!!!! ;(
Anyway... thanks for the feedback you gave me this week...
I'll promise to do better this week!
This will go to my fans! ;)
There was no flash in the photo... it was a lamp actually, but i was too close to the object... i learn my lesson...
Eve was the "original sin" however she commited one of the seven sins wrath.
There are 7 apples... but 1 of the apples seems to be part of the others... take a close look!
Well once again... Thank you very much!
Richi |
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10/20/2002 09:06:00 PM |
"ingas a veinte..."
Richie... Richie... otra oportunidad!, otra oportunidad!
: p |
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10/20/2002 12:13:00 PM |
| interesting concept ... and positioning of the apples ... 6-photosbyayme |
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10/20/2002 08:58:00 AM |
| I think focus and lighting don't match. Your focus is on the statue in the background but your lighting highlights the apples in the front. That's why I would like the photo better without the flash(?) light on the apples and more light on the statue. I also think one apple would be enough. More just distract too much. -stephan |
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10/19/2002 07:52:00 PM |
| Wow, i really like the way you put together the images...... first rate. |
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10/18/2002 05:44:00 PM |
| Interesting concept, the lighting and focus could be improved a little. |
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10/18/2002 04:48:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background8,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
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10/17/2002 03:16:00 PM |
| I like your concept, however, the light is uneven. |
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10/16/2002 07:14:00 PM |
| Not one of the "7". Get your idea, though. The apples alone would have done it. |
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10/16/2002 04:11:00 PM |
| Effective composition. The bright light spot on the first apple seems distracting. Otherwise good. |
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10/16/2002 02:00:00 PM |
| good picture i like the way the apples are in that row and what the girl represents |
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10/15/2002 06:42:00 PM |
| But is it one of the seven? 5 nards656 |
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10/15/2002 11:51:00 AM |
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10/15/2002 08:46:00 AM |
| Good idea. The reflection on the first apple is a little distracting. I would like it to be a bit sharper. |
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10/15/2002 04:01:00 AM |
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10/14/2002 05:05:00 PM |
| Very nice shot. I love the symbolism that you've portrayed. It seems to maybe be a hair overexposed. This would be a very nice shot with a little work. Maybe less intensity from the light, so cause the backdrop to be even darker... to where the apples and Eve figure seemed to be just in a "void." It looks to be a tough lighting situation... - 6 - JB |
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10/14/2002 04:53:00 PM |
| Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7 , Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7 , Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5 , Total Averaged Rating 6 . smshats |
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10/14/2002 04:18:00 PM |
| great idea and good depth of field, too many apples or not enough, I don't know. |
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10/14/2002 03:16:00 PM |
| Original idea. Work went into it. A bit uninspirig to me, but I recognise the work. 7/10 |
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10/14/2002 12:23:00 PM |
| Great idea, but it lacks a certain je ne sais quoi. I like the apples and the figure, but the focus seems off and the color/light range is somewhat muted. Also, the flash reflecting off the first apple is distracting. |
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10/14/2002 10:21:00 AM |
| Like the idea, the colors, eve statue doesnt makeclick to me! i would prefer a parra lief instead. wish you luck!!! |
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10/14/2002 06:27:00 AM |
| The depth is pretty good, but the glare coming off of the first apple is a little too bright. |
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10/14/2002 06:03:00 AM |
You thought of the project at hand and used your creativity to produce a
stunning composition. |
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10/14/2002 05:14:00 AM |
| "Original sin" would of been a better title.. |
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10/14/2002 12:39:00 AM |
| Creative idea. Focus it too soft for me and the light is hard. You score for being so creative. Nice. Justine. |
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10/13/2002 09:02:00 PM |
| Actually, original sin isn't part of the deadly sins, but i don't care for that :) i like the image alot, but i'd prefer if the model at end were a real woman to represent Eve. I like it, sort of. 9 paganini |
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