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08/30/2008 08:41:15 AM |
| Your face here, in itself, is not too soft, but the background, seeming so sharp in comparison, makes it look softer than it really is. You're not focussing on the background first, then getting into the shot, by any chance, are you? |
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08/19/2008 01:50:49 AM |
| nice expression and good angle of the shot, shame it isnt quite in focus though. no I like the black and white : ) |
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08/18/2008 02:55:58 PM |
| A little blurry and the tonal range could use a little oomph, but your eyes still carry the emotion right through the page to the viewer. What an incredible connection to the camera. |
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08/16/2008 02:16:40 PM |
I'm stoked to see a smile! Very pretty.
I agree with Ken about moving further away from the background, not only will it create a softer shadow but it will make the wrinkles in the background less noticable. :) |
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08/13/2008 07:54:09 AM |
I really like your B&W conversion and the high contrast created by the light background.
The lighting is very good, IMO, but that shadow is a bit distracting. What I would do is pull yourself a bit away from the background and make sure the focus is on you, which should create a much softer shadow. |
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08/12/2008 05:40:36 PM |
| You are SMILING!!! Yayyyyyy! I love it! |
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08/10/2008 09:28:24 AM |
| A little soft on the focus, but the BW works here and your eyes are always mesmerizing. Very nice job. |
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08/09/2008 10:03:42 PM |
| focus is a little off, and the shadow is a little distracting from your face, but i like the bw. glad to see ya back girl! |
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08/09/2008 08:50:13 PM |
| Wanna play, that's what you seem to be thinking from your expression. |
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08/09/2008 03:57:49 PM |
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