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08/17/2008 07:11:09 AM |
| Personally, I'd prefer to see some of the left-hand side of the frame cropped off. |
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08/07/2008 11:54:44 AM |
| Don't really like the black on your hand, but a good shot and nice start. |
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08/03/2008 04:54:03 PM |
| Welcome, Melissa! You are off to a great start with this one. Can't improve on the advice below, but still look forward to watching your portfolio through this project. |
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08/03/2008 05:49:42 AM |
| Nice sharpness and clarity. Creative use of less than photogenic task. As others have mentioned the lighting, I'm actually nearly ok with it. I might have gone with a tighter crop (off the top) but that is just a personal thing. |
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08/03/2008 05:30:50 AM |
| Best thing you can do with this, Ms. Nightclub Lady ;-), is somehow soften the shadows, either by diffusing or bouncing your flash. You want to avoid shadows with hard edges like the one at your nose and by your left cheek. They tend to make subjects look much harsher than they have to. There's a time to use such shadows though, to "break the rule" as it were, but I don't think that was the intention with this. |
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08/02/2008 07:48:07 PM |
| lol you really are getting into that brushing! you must have great teeth. :D Excellent job with the focus and the lighting. I'm still trying to figure that part out. :) |
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08/02/2008 06:43:04 PM |
| If I may ask a basic ? What kind of camera are you using? We might be able to share a few tips and tricks on how to soften that flash :) I noticed the stamp on the hand right off too. Funny how things jump out at you LOLOL Your focus is great though. Get those teeth girl!! :) I look forward to seeing more :) |
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08/02/2008 04:46:28 PM |
What a violent brusher you are! *grin*
I don't really like the light (of the flash?), but I like the candid 'honesty' of the shot. |
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08/02/2008 04:23:53 PM |
Hahaha I was thinking the same thing as SJCarter about the same hehe.
Nice focus! |
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08/02/2008 03:25:45 PM |
haha, you look super determined to have clean teeth. The focus and clarity are good, but the harsh shadows aren't so great. On camera flash? I can't ever manage to get good lighting with mine.
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Message edited by author 2008-08-02 19:26:14. |
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08/02/2008 11:23:12 AM |
| Nice clear photo with good tones. Interesting pose, but the colors are great. Can't help wondering what the stamp on the back of your hand is from... Late night out??? ;-) |
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08/02/2008 11:08:21 AM |
| hahah, reminds me of a photo i once did! its great to see you so eager to join us and learn, good luck! |
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