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08/15/2008 05:31:22 PM |
| A very underestimated shot. I love the child's arms up in the air in the bg and you leaving all work-related paraphernalia on the table...cellphone, car keys etc. well done! |
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08/06/2008 07:52:48 AM |
| First, I think your score was hurt by people that didn't think this was a still life. Now, on to the photo. A couple things jump out at me at first that I don't like. The background could be improved by removing the couch, I think a full white background would improve the image. The out of focus elements (primarily the child) would have been a bit better had they been a little more in focus. A bit more nit picky, I think the pile of stuff is a bit too much, it seems more like clutter to me. I probably would have gone with keys, phone and watch. Would any of this improved your score- I have no idea. |
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08/06/2008 07:45:25 AM |
| In a challenge with a different, more fitting, topic, this probably would have done much better. The DPC crowd is kind of a stickler for meeting the topic. Still lifes tend not to include people and/or animals, so some people would vote you lower on that alone. Additionally, on some monitors, your image may be seen to have blown highlights. I like the way the image looks and probably would have given it a 6. |
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08/01/2008 08:16:43 AM |
| Good concept. The way you have portrayed it also is good. But why not color for this happy moment? |
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07/31/2008 10:33:59 AM |
Great idea!
(daddy's late home 7:15):) |
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07/29/2008 09:07:32 PM |
| nice idea. nice shot. way blown out at the top. |
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