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04/29/2004 10:49:21 PM |
GREETINGS FROM "happy world of criticism club by mehmet"
i like this image lots, it has couple things going for it, first the pose and the positioning of the girl which i like very much and the expression on her face is a plus, but her hands in the side like that sems to indicate her being nervous perhaps, and that takes away some from the overall image. another thing is the optical illuison that takes place at the sindow. this is the primary point what makes the picture interesting i think ..and perhaps the model of the car that is coming from behind i mean what are the chances...lack of contrast is a issue though.. i would like to see this with higher contrast..great job.. keep it up
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04/18/2004 04:30:16 PM |
| Very nice...like the double view of the car. Like it very much. |
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04/17/2004 01:06:19 PM |
| Well taken.. Quite steady for a moving shot, or are you at the lights? Good anyway.. |
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04/16/2004 04:37:55 PM |
| slightly awkward-looking pose but nice idea |
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04/15/2004 08:34:34 AM |
| I like the framing and of course the idea of the photo, the subject of the older car provides more interest. I found the woman's arm position a little distracting, as if she was not comfortable (it's like she bracing herself) which is too bad because I enjoy a person in this shot, I think it adds context |
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04/15/2004 04:37:01 AM |
| Not sure what you're trying to achieve here. I feel like the shot is trying to tell a story, but it's not clear enough. The view out of the window is too cluttered, and the reflections are very offputting. I don't like that part of your model's face has been cropped off. |
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04/15/2004 12:38:53 AM |
| You spotted an interesting number of elements and made the best of less than ideal lighting, yet something about the composure doesn't quite work for me. I think I wonerd if you tried to get a wider angle in a shot like this you may have had a little more freedom in croping for a neater composure? |
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04/14/2004 09:42:38 PM |
| Interesting work, I like it... very original... the black care adds to this an intriguing detail, good luck |
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04/14/2004 09:34:09 AM |
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04/12/2004 08:27:37 PM |
| person is cut off on the right, should have her in the photo more. Also, not enough contrast. |
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04/12/2004 06:02:21 PM |
| This shot would be cool cropped just to show the car and the image of the car through the reflector glass...nice |
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04/12/2004 04:55:06 PM |
| Nice effect and I like the over all feel of this photo. |
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04/12/2004 04:40:42 PM |
| Unique perspective; brownie points for being different. |
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04/12/2004 03:48:23 PM |
| very cool. did you know the guy behind you? i wish the girl was a bit more in the frame...or more OUT of it (but i think IN would be better) |
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04/12/2004 01:12:37 PM |
| Very catchy photo. I don't know why I like it especially, but I just do. I think it makes me think of traveling or getting away. |
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04/12/2004 06:43:56 AM |
| Nice composition and framing, creative shot. The actual "window view" is a bit dreary and far less interesting than the girl, unfortunately. |
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04/11/2004 09:06:18 PM |
| The image-within-an-image adds a lot. |
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