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04/22/2004 06:34:46 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club.
I am having some trouble trying to figure out what your shot is supposed to be. It looks like maybe the opening from the back of a building looking to the inside and a door at the other end with the sign? The sign is very hard to read.
The black and white seems to work well with the metals and textures of the shot. I'm not sure I would have left the portion on the left visable (is it a reflection?) It doesn't seem to add anything to the composition and it detracts from the main focus, in my opinion.
Overall, I think the difficulty in figuring out the subject and straining to read the sign take away from the interest of the shot. Since the sign is hard to read anyway, perhaps pulling back a little to get the perspective from a bit of a distance might help.
I like the fact that it is different from other window shots.
I hope this is helpful and good luck in the challenges! |
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04/16/2004 05:29:03 PM |
| Can't really tell what this is... |
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04/15/2004 09:05:28 PM |
| Composition keeps me interested in this..... a few points off for some grit, never the less amoung the better b&w in this challenge. |
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04/12/2004 07:02:40 PM |
| i really like this composition. it has a nice field layout. not too cluttered, not overly textured... |
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04/12/2004 04:37:17 PM |
| Aluminum adds a cold feel to it...I like it. |
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