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07/12/2008 10:08:44 AM |
Critique Club Review:
Color, Saturation, and Hue: N/A image is monotone
Brightness and contrast: Highlights are about at the limit in the bright areas (see flower to left of bulb base) shadow holds details well.
Focus and depth of field: Background distractions are nicely minimized, but closest flowers go a bit soft. (see bottom edge of lower right flower.) Maybe one more f-stop would have helped.
Subjective: Meets challenge well. I like the idea, but the lightbulb is centered, a rule of thirds no-no for technical voters. Break the rule only if you have a good reason. I think the bulb just does look a little bit just stuck in there.
I do really like the way you matched the flowers to the bulb. Nice work. At first I thought I would rather have seen this image in color. But as I sit with it a bit, you have won me over and I can see your vision. |
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07/06/2008 05:18:18 PM |
| I think the colortone is great for the flowers. The bulb seems a tad out of focus (slight motion blur?). |
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07/04/2008 04:03:14 PM |
| Original idea and cute title. Simple, yet effective. 7 |
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06/30/2008 03:46:37 PM |
| Very neat! Lovely, lovely tones! |
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