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04/13/2004 11:19:35 PM |
Originally posted by fox25guy: this looks a little flat to me. a little more dop would help. |
All of these are unusually good comments. I am new to dpchallenge and think it will be enjoyable here. Besides being helpful, the above is quoted because I thought "flat" was really punny.
Message edited by author 2004-04-14 03:22:48. |
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04/12/2004 10:54:03 AM |
this looks a little flat to me. a little more dop would help. |
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04/09/2004 06:18:10 PM |
Nice try, but it really doesn't grab me. Technically, you did a good job and I like the crop. |
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04/09/2004 02:09:57 PM |
I think this might be improved upon if the lighting were such that the spokes could be seen better. much of them are hidden in the shadows leaving a disconnect between the axis and the rim. |
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04/08/2004 03:31:59 PM |
it's a good idea, but unfortunately given the fact that you only shot a part of it... u cannot really tell that is abandonned or what happened to the wheel;
good title |
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04/07/2004 02:34:05 PM |
Too much contrast in the photo- It looks like the exposure is right for the frame and the bright parts of the fern and all of the detail in the shadows is lost. |
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04/07/2004 01:57:31 PM |
the hot spots on the leaves are distracting, and subject should have been fill-flashed to combat the backlight. |
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04/07/2004 08:42:15 AM |
Cute title. I like the play between light and shadow going on in this picture. Assuming this was actually a retired tire, breaking a spoke or two could have strenghtened the theme. As far as composition, I find the tight crop on the left to be the only negative. I would have prefered the entire tire included, but that may just be me. Nice job. |
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04/07/2004 07:43:16 AM |
very little of the wheel is in the pic. the rack or fender support is the brightest item, drawing my attention, levain me usnure of what is the real subject i am supposed to focus on |
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04/07/2004 05:46:30 AM |
A bit on the contrasty side for me. |
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