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06/09/2008 11:56:06 AM |
I like how you squirted out some of the product. I think, if there were a good way to do it, it would look great if there were less of the bottle and more of that squiggle, but I also read that some people didn't know what it was, so who knows! Knowing that your object is makeup, it kind of gave it away I think. |
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06/04/2008 07:30:52 AM |
It was 11pm I really didn't give it much thought, time or what was remaining of my ever dwindling energy this week! I really need to give these shots some thought and a little care. Yes it's the contents of the stupid bottle. LOL |
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06/04/2008 07:22:34 AM |
Lol is that gel? At first I thought it was some pasta and for the life of me I could not understand why it was there. I'm such a goof. Why did your rotate it this way? How about a rotation to the right? Well the perspective does certainly force you to look thru the entire photo! |
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06/04/2008 06:47:26 AM |
I wasn't even sure what the squiggle was. The foucs is a little soft, but the composition is very nice. |
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06/03/2008 07:56:08 PM |
I like the angle of this one very much..... I hope you are enjoying this side challenge, as I am having a ball..... |
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06/03/2008 06:26:42 PM |
I thought the gel was some light painting at first. Nice composition imo. |
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06/03/2008 03:14:22 PM |
Good lighting all but the one hot area where it says Loreal |
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06/03/2008 01:44:48 PM |
I like the image, although i agree with bobnospum the focus seems to be the reflection from the flash (or other light source) which draws my attention to it. i like the colors and the image has real appeal.
Laziness wins again! the effort to stick with it is appreciated (i think a lot of us are in that boat)!
Message edited by author 2008-06-03 17:45:36. |
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06/03/2008 07:21:36 AM |
The gel part is cool and makes a nice pattern, shadows, etc.. Maybe a tighter crop of the left 2/3 with the same aspect ratio would have moved the main subject to the gel instead of the bottle. Just a thought. |
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06/03/2008 06:08:09 AM |
This seems a little soft. Needs a little boost too...maybe try playing with the curves and levels... or add a little clarify. I do like the way the gel looks like it's floating in the air. |
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