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04/19/2004 08:17:37 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Impressions: I like the concept, and the shot of the tires with great DOF works well. I particularly like that we get a closeup of a tire in the foreground which looks like it has pretty uneven tire wear.
Improvements: Looks like your camera failed you a bit, as there appears to be purple fringing around the trees. The sky itself seems a bit odd in color as well. Compositionally, it might have been better to use a vertical division into thirds, e.g., two thirds tires, one third sky (or vice versa, but since the tires are the subject, I think two-thirds tires.
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04/13/2004 07:04:28 AM |
| i like this one a lot, but i would like it more if there werent trees and clouds |
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04/12/2004 06:12:00 PM |
| aw thats a nice pic the sky is so pretty |
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04/12/2004 03:38:53 AM |
| Those are tyres, are'nt they? |
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04/10/2004 10:25:35 PM |
| Hi, sky is performing well, interesting subject too. But for me the horizon is too much in the middle, violation of the rule of thirds. Otherwise nice picture. |
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04/10/2004 08:44:16 AM |
| Too dark on the wheels, the effect is almost lost on two flat zones: Up shine, down dark.. |
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04/09/2004 02:29:49 AM |
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04/08/2004 09:30:36 AM |
| Maybe lost a little detail in the front, a little grainy? nice sky though! |
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04/07/2004 02:59:45 PM |
| I would have liked to see more definition of the tires. Nice use of the sky as a backdrop. |
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04/07/2004 11:07:07 AM |
| pretty sky, but the subject matter, the tires, are badly under exposed and too dark. i am looking at a black hole here, and that is not interesting to me |
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04/07/2004 08:00:54 AM |
| Good effort on a tricky exposure between the bright sky and dark tires, showing detail in the treads. THe composition doesn't tickle my fancy |
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04/06/2004 09:42:10 PM |
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