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04/20/2004 05:44:00 PM |
Greetings from the CC. Well your shot is overexposed quite a bit on the top right portion of the photo. I also find that it is very busy, perhaps shooting at a different aperature to allow for some depth of field, I can see that you may want to include the station in the background but I find it very busy. The sharpness and use of b & w is very well done. Hope this helps a little. Keep shooting. |
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04/13/2004 05:27:42 PM |
Good pic. I like the B & W |
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04/12/2004 06:04:17 PM |
a different angle may of made the shot more interesting |
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04/12/2004 05:35:36 PM |
Good BW image,not very much wheel in it . |
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04/11/2004 06:18:19 PM |
nice neat shot...
but it does not have a story... |
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04/09/2004 08:47:50 PM |
Black and white works very well here. I would crop more of the right for a better composition and try to avoid the overexposure on the upper part. |
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04/09/2004 01:17:26 PM |
wonderful contrasts and sharpness. |
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04/08/2004 05:12:23 PM |
Perfectly done B/w,background need some bluring done,9. |
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04/08/2004 03:08:03 PM |
Its a wonderful photo. Train yard in the background looks good. Nice shot. |
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04/07/2004 11:16:14 PM |
I find the bright white triangle draws too much attention. |
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04/07/2004 04:02:06 PM |
It seems that the actual wheels are a very minor part of this shot, partly due to the suspension hiding most of them. I know they're there, of course, but the building and the rest of the railcar tend to overpower the main subject. |
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04/07/2004 03:30:38 PM |
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