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06/10/2008 06:54:52 PM |
hey hey fromt he critique club!
i really like this image, the only thing that bothers me is the hair strands across her lips and right eye. lighting is very nice, the highlights on her hair are lovely. her gaze is looking right into the viewer, intriguing. the only thing besides that hair that i would change might be the angle of your model's head, tilting it a bit up might help her general appearance |
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06/03/2008 01:39:44 AM |
| The proverbial Rene Zellweger Mischief Pose! I like it! Great Job! :) |
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06/02/2008 11:35:01 AM |
| This has the potential to be an excellent portrait, but that tuft of hair below the model's lip looks disconnected and bears too much of a resemblance to a goatee. |
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06/01/2008 06:22:59 PM |
| This is beautiful but I find the piece of hair under her mouth very distracting |
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06/01/2008 04:07:15 PM |
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05/31/2008 05:37:50 PM |
| the strand of hair coming down under her lip looks like some strange goatee.. otherwise, beautiful photo |
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05/30/2008 05:48:45 PM |
| I think I might have explored using the model's finger in lieu of the tuft of hair which she appears to be blowing. Great low key. Very nice. |
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05/29/2008 07:18:43 PM |
| Although I rated you high ( E for EFFORT), The overall composition seems a bit erratic. You took the time to place your lights, pose your model, prepare the background, match dress color to blend in with background and yet her hair, facial expression, facial shadows, hair protruding from her chin seem all wrong and bothersome. Good luck. |
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05/29/2008 04:19:08 PM |
I think this image is by far the best, a portrait that really stands out.
Very nice lighting and pose, beautiful model, clever title..
Good luck! (10) |
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05/29/2008 10:08:41 AM |
| Love it - spot on! Nothing else to say but love it. |
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05/29/2008 06:44:21 AM |
| Lovely, just lovely... (he he) 8/10 |
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05/28/2008 01:31:38 PM |
| Ok, on my first look at this I loved the shot, and I still like it, however, upon looking at this again it looks like hair or something distracting around her chin. What is it? |
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05/28/2008 09:51:47 AM |
| The mouthful of hair is distracting. |
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05/27/2008 10:28:04 PM |
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