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04/13/2004 12:51:27 PM |
Beautiful detail and shallow DOF. Great colors and perspective. I like how you showed the age of this wheel. I think it would look really good with less blur (greater DOF) 9
Good luck...
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04/13/2004 09:47:01 AM |
| I think a little deeper DOF would have made it better? |
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04/13/2004 06:25:00 AM |
| the extremly shallow depth of field has caused too much of the subject to be out of focus, you have gone too far with a probably good idea |
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04/12/2004 01:36:18 PM |
| Good use of narrow DoF; you might have stoped down one more stop to get the entire wooden rim in focus, still throwing out the spokes & hub; really just my opinion, it does work fine as-is. |
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04/12/2004 11:23:42 AM |
| maybe a little too close up to really get the picture |
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04/12/2004 10:40:10 AM |
| it seems like this would have worked better using the center of the wheel as the foregound. Either that or increasing the DOF. If I didn't know this was a wheel challenge, I wouldn't know this was a wheel. Very artistic though. |
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04/11/2004 03:39:13 PM |
very nice ...i like the angle...
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04/11/2004 12:02:25 AM |
| Great perspective, and good use of DOF. I hope you do very well. -9 |
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04/10/2004 10:59:53 PM |
| The focus and texture on this wheel are really good. I think I would have liked the picture better if the angle was a bit different and more of the wheel would have been in focus. |
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04/10/2004 09:06:07 PM |
| A very odd perspective -- unless you have been run over recently! :D |
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04/10/2004 09:01:22 PM |
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04/10/2004 11:21:39 AM |
| I like the point of view,maybe smaller aperture will do better job? 7 |
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04/09/2004 08:12:06 PM |
| For me, too much of the wheel is out of focus...the intention is good, but I think the effect is lost. Maybe a little more of an angle toward the center would have helped. |
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04/09/2004 03:22:11 AM |
I like it,nice colours, original
Harm |
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04/08/2004 04:29:31 PM |
| cool idea, it might look better if you switched the focus and made the inside of the wheel sharp and the outside blurry |
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04/08/2004 01:54:03 PM |
| The perspective and colour in this photo is great. Having a much greater depth of field I think would improve it. (the eye is drawn to the yellow which is out of focus). 5 |
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04/08/2004 05:13:44 AM |
| A study how to use DOF, but we don't get much of the wheel for this subject matter. |
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04/07/2004 02:43:26 PM |
| Fantastic detail on the closup, but I find the blurred area on the right pulls the eye away from it. |
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04/07/2004 01:21:44 PM |
| Good perspective but more depth of field needed... |
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04/07/2004 10:20:03 AM |
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04/07/2004 07:45:31 AM |
| I'd like more depth of focus, maybe to the inner rim of the wheel. The hub is so fuzzy it's distracting |
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04/07/2004 07:33:18 AM |
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04/07/2004 02:49:57 AM |
| quite a lot of the frame is out of focus, and the part that is in focus seems a bit soft. I guess I'd like to see the whole thing |
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04/07/2004 12:08:51 AM |
| Excellent, the DOF here works really well. Got to be in the running for a ribbon. |
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04/06/2004 09:52:01 PM |
| maybe a greater depth of field, or having the cneter of the wheel in focus would have given a better sense of the image... |
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