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10/13/2002 04:58:00 PM |
Ok for a simple still life to meet the theme. |
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10/13/2002 06:58:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6, Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7, Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3, Total Averaged Rating5. Autool
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10/11/2002 01:41:00 AM |
Without the foreground shadows and the can a bit more to the right, this would've been a lot higher on my list. |
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10/11/2002 01:32:00 AM |
so it is, but still a nice photo:-) mysterious. |
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10/10/2002 12:58:00 PM |
This photo seems a little too simple... not sure if I like the low and off centered subject either. - bamaster (6) |
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10/09/2002 02:21:00 PM |
the shadows Hurt the cause & Appearance |
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10/08/2002 09:20:00 PM |
Technically correct , exposure, focus, saturation , contrast. 5 Good composition. 4 Tells a story or creates a mood 4 Impact to the viewer 4 Relevance to the Challenge6 Overall 5 sulamk
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10/08/2002 03:11:00 PM |
Yes it is. It is a trash can, and nothing more. I think this lacks something to make it exciting to me. The wall seems too bright in the sun, and the shadow is distracting. The top of the can is washed out. The anlge and framing/cropping are good, and the focus on the can is also nice. I like the use of neg. space, but kind of wish it were more interesting neg. space. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~ |
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10/07/2002 05:23:00 PM |
Overall I like this simplistic idea a lot. Had it been me, I may have tried moving the can further to the left to allow the full shadow in the shot, and eliminate the small diagonal shadow from the left. Again, still a very good idea. |
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10/07/2002 01:37:00 PM |
Your title says it all - but composition and lighting are poor |
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10/07/2002 07:52:00 AM |
Yup... it's a trashcan... The photo doesn't say much else :) - setzler |
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10/07/2002 06:38:00 AM |
Move it to the left and get it's whole shadow |
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10/07/2002 02:40:00 AM |
I really like the brick wall and the sunlight. I think this shot begs to have the can more off center though. Look at the shot in this challenge R2D2 and how the can off by itself came out so nice. Good job. DPz |
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