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08/24/2008 08:11:31 AM |
| Very unique shot, i think something that would help out a lot, would be better lighting, the lighting looks pretty harsh. I like the idea, and definitely a cool shot, nice job. |
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05/07/2008 12:54:35 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this shot doesn't "follow the rules" I don't think, but that helps add to the chaos of the shot. Having the balls in the bottom of the shot really give it a nice balance, and the wide angle makes the hand look disporportionatly small -- which is good.
Technically, I like the trails that are visible -- it really adds to the feeling of motion in the shot. Having the table not be green helps the shot too, as I think a green table would really make it to overbearing and bold. That said, a touch more contrast might really give it a bit more depth and add to the "punch" a bit more.
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05/05/2008 06:35:55 AM |
 ooo, this is deeply funky. i love the tracery of the ball paths and the wide angle forced perspective. i think this might be technically better with slightly more contrast, or deeper tones, but i really enjoy intellectually as it is. nice one! |
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05/04/2008 08:48:20 AM |
| Good sense of action/motion. Cool. |
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04/29/2008 01:23:17 PM |
| Very cool time lapse idea |
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04/29/2008 11:22:17 AM |
| Interesting. i like the desaturation and the motion blur. Well done. |
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04/29/2008 11:11:25 AM |
| good use of shutter speed. |
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04/28/2008 07:00:00 PM |
| Cool effect! colors seem a little off though |
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04/27/2008 09:46:32 PM |
| Nicely done! Low lighting long exposure with rear curtain strobe I suspect? |
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04/27/2008 09:07:16 PM |
| Interesting shot. Almost seems noisy. Maybe a different angle would help as the concept seems better than the actual picture. Definitely worth exploring though. |
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