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04/15/2008 07:31:37 PM |
This image looks too dark. Not cropping the swan's reflections would have helped too. |
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04/15/2008 11:08:37 AM |
Here's my two cents. :)
First of all, the image is underexposed. I can understand that perhaps you wanted a low-key type atmosphere, and I really like them myselve, but I'm not sure it's really working here. Also, I would suggest avoiding cropping off the reflection of the birds, and straightening out the "horizon" in the distance the background. This is an ecxellent concept though - good idea! |
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04/15/2008 10:52:27 AM |
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04/15/2008 02:32:42 AM |
nice idea.. could have done with more contrast though? |
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04/14/2008 04:48:36 PM |
Very good idea, the effects are great. It should be just a little lighter though. |
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04/14/2008 12:21:12 PM |
Good concept but a little dull colour wise. I'm sure simple white balance or curves adjustment could have added a lot more vibrant white to the swans and made this a much better shot.
I'd also like to see the very end of the tail and have a little space left and maybe some more of the reflection. |
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04/13/2008 05:46:54 PM |
Original for sure. I would like it even more if the 'swans' were, well, whiter! |
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04/13/2008 02:18:35 PM |
Cool minimalist idea, however overall too dark. Better lighting would have given this a lot more impact. |
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04/12/2008 07:07:00 PM |
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04/12/2008 06:50:11 PM |
Origami swans -- nice idea and lighting. |
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04/12/2008 06:01:41 AM |
The picture would have been better if there was better lighting. |
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04/11/2008 06:23:49 AM |
this is a good shot, but its just too dark. maybe another lighting source or a different background |
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04/10/2008 08:11:11 AM |
Good idea, would liked to have seen the image a bit brighter. |
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04/09/2008 06:42:50 PM |
Could be a little brighter, but I like the idea! |
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04/09/2008 06:41:34 PM |
Sweet idea. A blue background/surface and a little more light would have made this very special :) |
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04/09/2008 06:40:00 PM |
great concept...i would have really liked this better if it was lighter. |
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04/09/2008 04:58:12 PM |
Nice idea...wish it were brighter and that the reflection was complete. |
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04/09/2008 02:40:34 PM |
Very dark, crane cut off (tail & reflection). Lighten and recrop. :) |
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04/09/2008 12:09:16 PM |
Too dark, but a very nice idea. Lighten it up a bit so the swans stand out more. Perhaps cropping a bit further out so the whole reflection shows, as well. 5 |
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04/09/2008 10:04:38 AM |
Nice idea, but you could have done with getting the swans much brighter |
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04/09/2008 09:31:15 AM |
I like the swans. For me, if they were "swimming" on a dark blue base to suggest water it would have even greater impact or maybe not cutting off the reflection of the foreground swan. |
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04/09/2008 08:31:44 AM |
nice origami but poor lighting, a lot more could have been done here. |
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04/09/2008 07:41:41 AM |
Could use some better lighting, i like the cropping though |
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04/09/2008 04:28:37 AM |
Rather dark and not much landscape |
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04/09/2008 03:05:51 AM |
if this had been composed to show the whole reflection and may be a square format i would have given it 10 but iam giving 8 |
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04/09/2008 12:31:42 AM |
I wish a bit more contrast - great idea |
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