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03/30/2004 03:44:38 AM |
| Lovely portrait - the veil covering (but not quite) the subject's face really work. Minor point - the backdrop seems to clash with the wonderful tones of the scarf and shirt (orange is a tough color to match) The black part of the frame could be a bit thinner as it competes with the subject vs. compliemnt. |
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03/29/2004 06:42:48 PM |
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03/29/2004 02:49:27 PM |
| Nice photo of the woman, but next time try for a background that isn't creased. Those little details do make a difference. |
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03/27/2004 02:41:32 AM |
| Very nice picture. Nice model with beautiful eyes. I'm not sure about the yellow background and the folds in the background tissue are disturbing. -7 |
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03/26/2004 03:09:17 PM |
| Nice vale and conceptual use of vale. Like the expression as well. Maybe not intentional (also part of the draw) but the left hand suggests a becon. What I don't like is the background cloth. The hard creases are a real disappointment. The soft waves in the cloth are nice but then you notice the creases. |
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03/26/2004 11:30:17 AM |
| You are lucky to have some to co-operate in these (forgive me) slightly dopey pictures. This one looks good fun.. |
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03/26/2004 10:21:04 AM |
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03/25/2004 12:33:49 PM |
| good photo! (but i have seen many photos of a girl covering half of her face) |
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03/25/2004 11:59:26 AM |
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03/25/2004 11:27:51 AM |
| I feel a closer crop could improve this, still a very good shot. |
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03/25/2004 09:09:10 AM |
| Your picture is really nice, beautiful color, well composed and great focus. I think if you would have ironed the drape used in the background it would have made it better. For some reason when I look at it my eye realy notices the wrinkles in the drape. |
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03/24/2004 06:13:38 PM |
| nice idea and lighting, but my dream would require ironing the background sheet and tidier hair on the model (if you are going to set things up, go all the way ...) |
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03/24/2004 01:43:20 PM |
| I think this would have been more effective with more of a close up. That way you wouldn't get as many of the wrinkles in the back ground as well. I would have cropped the left side just past her hand, and up from the bottom to where the trim is on the neckline. Still I think it's a nice shot for this challenge. |
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03/24/2004 12:30:59 PM |
This doesn't feel Arabian. She needs more make-up and more jewels! Sparkles!!!
The backdrop needs pressing and the light is far to bright. It's not a bad entry, please know I'm not slamming your shot, just my opinion and thoughts. |
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03/23/2004 09:05:06 PM |
| Nicely done and a perfect match for the challenge. The model has the most beautiful eyes. |
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