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Rooftop Rhythm
Rooftop Rhythm
Donna21


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Pattern III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S9000
Date: Mar 21, 2008
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Mar 25, 2008

This is part of the roof of a dormitory at the college where I work - thought about calling it Dormitory Dormers, lol.

Until I took this shot, I never noticed the dormer roofs alternated between rounded and pointed.

It may be a bit dark, but I didn't want the white trim to look blown out.

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Place: 143 out of 290
Avg (all users): 5.3784
Avg (commenters): 5.7143
Avg (participants): 5.3026
Avg (non-participants): 5.4312
Views since voting: 521
Views during voting: 243
Votes: 185
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/01/2008 09:41:43 AM
I think this photo may have benefitted from cropping out everything about those 3 chimneys and really focused on the windows.
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03/31/2008 05:23:29 AM
the lines in this photo define the positive characteristics of this image.
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03/30/2008 10:53:49 AM
GOod pattern and good angle
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03/29/2008 06:10:04 AM
Very nice , very well composed 7
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03/28/2008 06:31:39 PM
yep I see it...pointy, curved, pointy, curved, pointy...:-) good lighting nice lines 7
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03/27/2008 08:42:11 AM
Nice job! I know your intent was the rooftop, but there are obviously patterns below the roof as well. I think changing the angle just slightly to remove the eaves in the upper left, and bring the weather vane on the left to the top, would bring in some more visiual interest. We would still the rooftop, but there would be more.
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03/26/2008 07:48:24 PM
There is a pattern of 3 groups of 5 windows here, however the far right window is missing. I think that could have been the focus.
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03/26/2008 05:39:29 AM
good clarity and depiction of pattern, but i would have like to see less of the sky.
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