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03/25/2008 08:37:48 AM |
I really like this on many levels. The colors are wonderful, the mirror adds more interest to the shot and it is obvious that this is in a store. I think that the subject is getting lost, though. It would not have harmed this shot to sacrifice some of the vegetables for a tighter framing of the grocer...the mirror would still give you depth. Plus the lighting on the grocer's face seems off, there are a lot of shadows around his eyes. |
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03/25/2008 07:22:47 AM |
nice photo however, I think it would have been better if the reflection of the guy had been cropped out and if it had ben straightend just slightly. |
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03/25/2008 06:34:58 AM |
It seems like you oveplayed the environment and underplayed your subject. |
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03/22/2008 04:31:07 PM |
Excellent point of view. A seven for you. |
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03/21/2008 03:22:40 PM |
not a bad shot but he's a backdrop to the produce, would like to see it other way round. |
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03/21/2008 01:06:37 PM |
This is an extremely busy shot. the foreground (fruit and signs) are too dominant in this shot and the guy is almost lost in the background. The reflection is somewhat distracting (especially since it shows his balding patters). The lighting, which I assume is just store lighting, is coming from the top right (his left). but he is facing the opposite direction, which ends up with a dimly lit face...4 |
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03/21/2008 03:17:25 AM |
Nice. I like how the apples ...errmmmm.... coincide with his head ;) Adds a fun element to a tehcnically fine photo. |
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03/20/2008 04:11:11 PM |
good colors , but there just isnt enough of the subject in the frame for me, I do like the second image of him in the mirrors but the fellow seems a bit lost in his enviroment. |
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03/20/2008 12:47:57 AM |
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03/19/2008 06:03:53 PM |
The mirror distracted me a little. |
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03/19/2008 02:22:26 PM |
lots of circles, his head, the fruit, the signs. I think this could have been improved with a more direct gaze from the subject. Not always necessary but I think it would have grounded him the frame - as it is, I want to see who or what he is looking at. |
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03/19/2008 08:50:10 AM |
Love that smile! The busy surroundings really draw you in. I like what you've done with this one. Basic editing worked well for you with this scene. |
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03/19/2008 02:57:22 AM |
Great environment. Composition is a little to smack in the center for me. Also... need to get him looking at the camera. |
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03/18/2008 09:57:37 PM |
Nicely executed, although the mirrors got me dizzy for awhile they really make the shot. |
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