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Challenge: Magazine Cover Revisited (Advanced Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-S70
Location: Golden Gate Park
Date: Mar 18, 2004
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Nature, Animals
Date Uploaded: Mar 21, 2004

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04/01/2004 11:44:41 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Hi Fadoi...

Good rule of thumb: If you ask for an in depth critique, you should be willing to include your own comments with your photo when you submit it. Does this photo not have any meaning or interest to you personally? If not, it's not worth asking for an in depth critique. You have to care about it before you should ask someone else to do the same :)

This particular composition feels too tight. Filling the frame has its merits, but effectively 'padding' your subject does as well. The spotty sunlight is working against you in this photo. The subject's environment is also not creating a lot of separation between it and the subject.

I spend quite a bit of time photographing ducks and geese at my local park. Sometimes I just have to follow them around (or let them follow me around) until the light and conditions allow some nice photos....

Keep up the good work...

John Setzler
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03/28/2004 07:20:52 PM
Nice 'quacker' with good light and color.
The eye!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/28/2004 03:17:48 PM
best duck ever..
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03/27/2004 01:41:03 PM
sign me up for some paté from this one....wow! What a fat goose! Can it fly? Great shot.
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03/26/2004 10:22:57 AM
BIG duck A$$! Sort of looks like he saying "WHAT are YOU looking at, buddy?".
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03/25/2004 08:59:26 AM
lovely capture, pity it isn't more facing the camera.
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03/24/2004 05:37:19 AM
Very cute... a little overexposed though, especially on his face where you have blown-out highlights. The rest of him could do with darkening so you can see more of the textures in the feathers. The whiteish foliage to his right in the background detracts a little, and the shadow detracts a lot. I think negative space is always needed in the direction that a person or animal is looking into. Here, you need more negative space to the left of the shot to give him room to look into.
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03/22/2004 11:58:08 PM
I like the attention of its eye. I don't really like staring at its back though.
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03/22/2004 08:42:11 PM
Very cute shot, wonderful lighting, the shadows on the duck add alot of charm to this shot. Great contrast and good eye for detail, like the dark spot on the end of his bill, great work. 9
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03/22/2004 10:53:28 AM
That duck can fly, a sitting duck to waterfowlers.
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03/22/2004 12:30:23 AM
I really like the clarity and the dappled lighting in this image..especially on the head which highlights the colour in the eye....8
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