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03/19/2008 03:01:53 PM |
I'm new to the photography field so I do appreciate the advice. Well, for those who lent some advice to the shot. I don't know who put the paint on the wall but I would consider that alone to be pollution. I can see the need for more brick, that would have looked better I think. Too much negative space at the top...yep I agree. I submitted this picture so that I could get some helpful hints as to how to better myself in the field. So again, for those of you who offered some constructive criticism I thank you. |
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03/18/2008 07:49:38 PM |
I think this might have had more impact if you pulled back just a little bit, show more of the wall |
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03/15/2008 09:37:42 AM |
Good message -- gotta love positive pollution. As for the composition, I think it would look better with a good portion of the top cropped off, and I'd like to see more of the brick wall on the right. |
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03/14/2008 08:13:00 AM |
It might have been more interesting if you took this from a different angle, instead of straight-on. |
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03/13/2008 10:26:16 AM |
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03/13/2008 05:38:33 AM |
this is a deep picture, i like the creativity. But its kinda boring |
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03/12/2008 01:19:45 PM |
Not sure about the crop, my eye goes directly towards the bricks |
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03/12/2008 11:28:24 AM |
On it's own the picture seems almost too random [snapshot-ish].. but it has so much potential .. Firstly, I think, maybe going landscape would have been better.. The picture seems oddly composed because of that.. with the landscape you could have more of the nicely textured negative space.. We could have seen more of the brick wall which would lent more diversity.. Going black and white would have tied the different textures together while bringing them out and highlight the message on the wall more attractively.. |
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03/12/2008 05:26:15 AM |
Is graffiti for cowards too? |
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03/12/2008 03:23:15 AM |
Pollution with a message? |
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