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04/01/2004 12:28:20 AM |
A note from the Critique Club!
This is a well done composition. You have enough space for the title/side text, so it fits the magazine challenge. A lot of detail, nice saturation and it keeps the viewers eye busy going through detail.
The bottom of the picture could be more in focus/sharper, and you could maybe increased the brightness a bit, and increased the contrast. But overall a well thought through capture.
Message edited by author 2004-04-01 05:30:34. |
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03/28/2004 05:19:09 AM |
| The color effect in the sky is impressive, but the slipper looks too artificial for me. |
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03/27/2004 11:57:02 AM |
| Like the photo, especially with the contrasting red in it... But I don't think it would up as a cover. 7 |
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03/26/2004 04:41:46 PM |
| Nice use of thirds. Lots of space for type and stuff. The flip-flop looks accidental and, for me, takes away from the composition. |
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03/25/2004 10:45:38 AM |
| This is a very clever idea for a picture. I think it would be a bit better if the thong (or flip flop) were in better focus and the angle of the shot was higher so the thong wouldn't look so huge. At first I had a hard time figuring out what it was. |
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03/25/2004 06:07:43 AM |
| I think the contrast is too high and the gloomy colors would deter me from taking this trip. Great idea though. Good luck! |
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03/24/2004 05:30:13 AM |
| Very interesting composition, which invites the viewer to reflect on it for a while. Subtle and imaginative use of blue and red. Not sure what happened to your foreground texture though, it doesn't look good up close. Is this as a result of butchery by NeatImage? Maybe too much contrast? I would say that the overall mood, although very effective, is too drab and bleak for a tourism magazine. |
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03/23/2004 02:42:46 PM |
| great shot. love the POV. So great that I wish that was my sandal! |
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03/23/2004 06:52:24 AM |
| Interesting shot, but the heavy wet sand won't make any front pages, I am afraid... |
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03/23/2004 01:25:54 AM |
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03/22/2004 12:31:59 PM |
| B-r-r-r-r-r-r.... Chilly! |
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03/22/2004 12:13:38 PM |
| I like the "grainy"-ness, no pun intended, but a little bit more shallower of a DOF (maybe just the immediate foreground before the sandal) would have been effective. |
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03/22/2004 05:16:59 AM |
| Like this...just the crop is way too tight on the left. Still a good entry, hope it does well. |
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03/22/2004 02:23:19 AM |
| Nice image - excellent detail. Not sure if it could be a magazine cover. |
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03/21/2004 08:15:07 PM |
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