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02/19/2008 04:35:37 PM |
| The white balance seems a bit off in this shot, though maybe you wanted the yellow tint. I feel a more solid background could help b/c the background is a bit dstracting imo. |
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02/19/2008 03:58:51 PM |
| The lighting is too yellow, and the chair in the back is a little distracting. Nice set up. |
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02/18/2008 05:13:49 PM |
| I think that you could have only put one or two items of toppings in the frame and made the image a little more interesting. The background objects are too neat and strait in a row. I think that it could have used some ruffling up. |
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02/16/2008 02:02:39 PM |
| Work on the color cast. This is WAY too yellow. It also has a distracting background and harsh shadows. |
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02/15/2008 07:26:56 PM |
| The lighting needs to be brighter..the jar on the far right is hard to read/see. |
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02/15/2008 09:57:40 AM |
The white balance seems to be way off in this shot and it is a bit too cluttered. I studied it trying to see if you were attempting to tell a story with this setup - different breads/empty sugar free jars/caps on - caps off, etc. But wasn't able to make out anything.
Mmmm, I do love black raspberry jam though. |
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02/14/2008 07:40:00 AM |
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02/13/2008 04:49:39 PM |
| Fix your white balance please. And use all full or all empty jars if you're going to have them in |
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02/13/2008 12:54:56 PM |
| I don't like the cast here |
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02/13/2008 10:45:39 AM |
| This is a nicely composed still life of bread and the texture of the bread stands out well. It has however some problems. First of all, your white balance is off, the light is too warm. You can and should correct for this, either in-camera or in PP. Second, there are several distracting elements in the background. With a still life, try to keep your background as neutral as possible. Third, I would have liked a slightly lower POV on this one, to give it a more classic still life look. |
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02/13/2008 10:40:27 AM |
| the lighting killed this shot, but good idea with the jelly |
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02/13/2008 09:48:12 AM |
| very nice composition, i would have loved for the color to be less yellow |
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02/13/2008 08:21:37 AM |
my favorite is the one in the middle :)
the WN seems to be way off. Too much yellowish tone. |
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02/13/2008 08:12:20 AM |
| Good composition with the bread. The whole image looks a little soft. I don't really like the color cast. |
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02/13/2008 07:20:55 AM |
| Yellow cast and possible over-saturation spoil an otherwise honest to goodness bread shot. |
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02/13/2008 04:02:08 AM |
| the white balance needs looking at |
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