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Challenge: Bread (Basic Editing)
Collection: Food & Drink
Camera: Pentax K100D
Lens: Sigma 18-50mm f/2.8 EX DC for Pentax
Location: My Kitchen
Date: Feb 10, 2008
Aperture: f/13
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/2
Galleries: Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Feb 8, 2008

This is the third shoot for this challenge ... kept trying different ideas, nothing I really liked a ton, but I think this one might do OK in the challenge -- has that graphic feel DPC seems to like. A little blown out on the left on the plate because I adjusted the WB a bit more than needed to true up the colors in the jelly.

Would have liked to clone out that crumb below the jelly slice, but its Basic rules. :>(

Statistics
Place: 95 out of 167
Avg (all users): 5.1223
Avg (commenters): 5.7143
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Views since voting: 843
Views during voting: 340
Votes: 229
Comments: 9
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/19/2008 06:56:34 PM
Not quite sharp in the fine details. If this was handheld, a tripod may have been in order.
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02/19/2008 04:52:18 PM
sems a bit oof.
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02/18/2008 04:28:55 PM
I think it would have like this better if the light was just a little bit softer.
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02/15/2008 02:08:40 PM
This isn't the way one normally sees a pb&j, and that's what makes it good. The symmetric composition is cool. If you got rid of the shadows and crumbs, this would be right at home next to Worhol's soup cans.
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02/14/2008 06:14:23 AM
nice take on the challenge, the colours are vivid, it is all crisp and very clean to look at, well done
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02/13/2008 10:10:29 PM
i really like this idea. it's simple. :)
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02/13/2008 11:10:14 AM
A bit too bright/harsh lighting but a cute setup.
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02/13/2008 09:15:05 AM
This remember me the cover of the Jefferson Airplane's LP "Volunteers". 7
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02/13/2008 06:30:19 AM
Over-sharp, over-saturated, possibly over-sharpened. I think some American people like the goop that's concealing the bread, but it looks pretty ghastly to me. Nice job of getting the subject isolated from the neautral background.
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