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04/15/2004 06:43:47 AM |
This, IMHO, should have been a top 10 finish. The expression and composition are classic. |
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03/21/2004 11:17:49 AM |
Very good. Fine composition. |
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03/20/2004 02:35:27 PM |
Good picture! I like how the bars frame the picture!
The focus seems a wee bit soft though, but good pic! |
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03/18/2004 08:57:40 AM |
great composition and nice colors. |
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03/17/2004 06:57:18 PM |
Beautiful woman and I love the way you've framed her in the window and with the tree. I do find this image to be too busy. Though I would imagine this to be your intention, I don't like her distant stare as I find it to be almost vacant, as if she's not looking at anything in particular. Also, she is wearing too much black that is all blending together. |
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03/17/2004 05:55:07 PM |
at first notice the border is distracting...the photo itself is very nice...has a nice candid feel to it...you model doesn't appear to be posing, but rather just standing there waiting for something...very relaxed, natural feel to it |
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03/17/2004 03:56:07 PM |
It's Yoko Ono!! Nice composition. |
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03/17/2004 11:10:14 AM |
Love the composition and color - wish her right shoulder and arm were somehow more articulated from the shadow but that's a minor thing. - 8 |
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03/17/2004 02:18:22 AM |
Beautiful shot!!! nice composition... nice colour... 8 for me |
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03/16/2004 10:54:30 PM |
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03/16/2004 11:04:41 AM |
i love the composition, color and emotion of this one. good job |
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03/16/2004 07:38:59 AM |
Hmmmmm....I think you're on to a good idea here but would want to see more poses from different angles. The model looks impatient, or bored, or something. The lighting in the background behind the window needs a lift in the corner, her jacket sleeve gets lost there. |
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03/16/2004 04:49:35 AM |
I want to see her closer. |
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03/15/2004 03:02:57 PM |
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03/15/2004 09:38:54 AM |
This is a great image. I love the background as well. I like how you composed everything adn the skin tones and sharpness are perfect. |
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03/15/2004 07:50:33 AM |
I like this wider portrait that shows some of her environment - it makes me think that perhaps she is an artist, this lady who lives in a beautifully decorated loft apartment. |
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03/15/2004 05:09:55 AM |
Nice, natural light. A closer shot of the subject might have been better though. There's a bit too much in the composition for a portrait. Is that a lace-leaf maple? |
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03/15/2004 05:00:36 AM |
Stunning shot it really grabbed me. She is relaxed and folds into the background. Excellent work. |
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03/15/2004 03:40:12 AM |
nice work here.....I like the composition. Lots of different elements going on in this photo, but they all seem to work together well. |
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03/15/2004 03:08:49 AM |
Nice framing, frames within as well, dark lines do this shot good. The tree interacts nicely with the model. Good job. |
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03/15/2004 01:21:55 AM |
I love the lighting and muted colors, but a a stickler for square lines, I would have tried to get the window perfectly horizontal. Nice shot. |
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03/14/2004 11:27:58 PM |
Nicely balanced composition and complimentary lighting. It is a pity that it is tilted in the lower half (down to left), maybe a change in camera position might have helped (squarer to the wall). Use of the tree in the background is very clever. |
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03/14/2004 07:39:56 PM |
I really like this shot. It makes me wonder what she's thinking. I can't decide if that tree adds to the photo or distracts. Still, I like that it seems like a naturally caught pose. |
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