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03/25/2008 05:53:03 PM |
| the long shadows come off well in this shot - for some reason it still seems to lack a bit of something - a someone or something that is the subject that all those leading lines lead to... |
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03/01/2008 11:48:19 PM |
| This is a difficult one to process well. All those shadows as well as the bright light at the end of the tunnel. I like the light reflecting on the puddle in the tunnel. |
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02/26/2008 06:18:00 PM |
| The railing makes a nice leading line. I like the lighting and the nice lines created by the shadows. I do think a little more contrast might help the shadows stand out more |
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02/15/2008 06:54:01 PM |
| This is a really difficult shot to get: here I find the detail vying with the powerful abstract shapes plus the leading lines that put depth, almost another dimension, into play. One thing that may be skewing it is the wide angle which puts the verticals in the forefront aslant, while the distant cameo sits purring smugly and righteously; I wonder if the viewer wouldn't prefer to be smug and righteous. |
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02/15/2008 10:53:47 AM |
I dunno... I've been struggling for inspiration as well as the PP. How's this one?
20% insiration and 80% perspiration! I often get like that as well and have a total creative block. One thing you can try is to get a subject or location and shoot 50 or so shots of the same thing but from different angle/perspectives.
Mind you I dounbt an uninspired fotog would think of taking a shot like this so the mojo isn't all gone ;)
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02/14/2008 03:31:13 PM |
| I like the leading line of the railing through the image. I think more tonal range or contrast would make this a better shot. I agree with the little to left suggestion on the composition. I think I would have also liked to see the top of the arch. |
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02/12/2008 08:51:42 PM |
| Cool shot, I like the lines that draw you through the image and the lighting is nice. I keep feeling that I would like to see the rest of the top of the arch, though it might not work compositionaly. |
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02/12/2008 02:39:21 PM |
| A small hint, a tiny peek. "A keyhole view" is what you remind me about with your photo. It is a useful way to compose a picture and I am learning from it. |
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02/11/2008 06:14:16 AM |
| I like how you used the rail to lead the viewer thru the picture. I think I would like to see a little more contrast to kind of highlight the light shining thru the tunnel. I think that's my favorite part. |
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02/08/2008 12:00:28 PM |
| I like the counterbalance of the rail with the curved arch and it's shadow. I think the foreground is just a tad "heavy" - ie too much of the sidewalk. The mystery lies in the opening and what's beyond. |
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02/08/2008 07:21:49 AM |
| Nice sweeping line - great light coming from the other side of the tunnel - light at the end... The tones are good - not too contrasty. |
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02/08/2008 04:36:19 AM |
| Love the light coming in at the end of the tunnel and the lines are great. |
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02/07/2008 12:02:48 PM |
| I think I prefer it the way it is. The leading lines through the tunnel work well for me. Only issue it that it would be nice to have something at the end of the walkway to give it a bit more focus. |
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02/07/2008 05:36:09 AM |
I would agree, a little bit on the left at a lower angle. The celling is a little claustrophobic in this angle (probably because the road goes up in the distance).
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02/07/2008 05:17:29 AM |
| oh and awesome leading lines! |
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02/07/2008 05:17:00 AM |
| this is a great subject. I like the lighting works very well. The composition could be moved to the left a bit. What would be way cool.. get a tripod and set the timer, run to the area where the sun is..your shadow would give it an interesting effect too. |
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