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06/05/2008 11:33:30 AM |
to be honest the shot does nothing for me |
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02/12/2008 02:27:57 PM |
The shadow looks a little odd as if you were shooting at an extreme angle.
Also, at 38k,your file size is a lot smaller than was allowed. I think you have lost some clarity and detail to JPEG compression. Check the JPEG compression settings in your image editor and always try to save as close to the limit for a challenge as you can get it without going over. |
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02/12/2008 09:48:47 AM |
lol great idea. how wude ;-) |
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02/12/2008 05:50:31 AM |
There's something odd about the sillouette... |
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02/12/2008 05:34:20 AM |
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02/10/2008 09:33:11 PM |
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02/10/2008 03:03:04 PM |
Nice concept. The bedspread/sheets are a little dark. |
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02/10/2008 09:06:40 AM |
Good idea and good shadow.
The objects in the foreground could do with being better lit and slightly sharper focus so they lead the viewer into the picture a little more.
i wonder whether the picture might have been better with the model included in the picture but just out of focus ? At the moment you are apparently looking across the open packet and over the underware(?) to a wall - instead of to the lady.
Still a good effort though and a nice shape to the model : ) |
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02/10/2008 05:47:17 AM |
Shadow is fuzzy some. Color is dim in foreground. |
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02/08/2008 01:52:00 PM |
I really like the composition, but the shadow needs more clarity. (ven though it is a shadow) |
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02/08/2008 04:52:06 AM |
Clever. I couldn't help but laugh a little. WEll done |
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02/07/2008 04:56:54 PM |
Leroy?! Call me weird but I recognise that silhouette. Lovely shot and fantastic advert. The only downside is that there should be either more light on the product itself, but I can appreciate how hard that is to do with the silhouette AND basic editing. |
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02/07/2008 04:12:27 PM |
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02/07/2008 03:20:03 PM |
heh heh heh.... great idea and I know from experience that it still sells. However the light seems a bit dark and the ad needs more of an emphasis on the product to sell it better. |
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02/07/2008 11:04:23 AM |
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02/07/2008 04:43:17 AM |
I think you're going to get a lot of similar comments on this photo. An excellent idea, with some great aspects.. But the subject (the wrapper) is so dark! What is the stuff around the wrapper? I can't even tell.
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02/06/2008 05:01:05 PM |
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02/06/2008 03:27:03 PM |
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02/06/2008 11:34:09 AM |
Actual subject, on the black is hard to see. 5. |
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02/06/2008 11:25:59 AM |
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02/06/2008 11:25:31 AM |
Risquee! Interesting concept |
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02/06/2008 05:02:38 AM |
Can't really tell what the ad is for. The product is a little too small. |
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02/06/2008 03:44:01 AM |
I think this will be a bit coarse for some |
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02/05/2008 10:56:51 PM |
The shadow is a bit warped.
Also, the bit of ripped packaging distracts me.
And the packaging isn't prominent enough.
Nice idea though. |
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02/05/2008 10:54:40 PM |
The torjan pack could be a bit more prominent in the pic... very good idea though! |
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