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03/15/2008 03:55:41 PM |
I gave this a 5. My wife had a good comment. The eyes were supposed to be the focus, but in this shot, the eyes point you away from them - they "give up" the focus rather than grabbing it.
Welcome to dpchallenge. There is lots of opportunity to learn here. Your shots so far show great creativity, and as you hone your technique, your scores will go up. (I'm still waiting for that to happen...but it will, I know it will... ;-p) |
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02/25/2008 02:36:10 PM |
| Wow looks like you need to set your white balance |
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02/12/2008 12:39:39 PM |
| Background too distracting and subject looking too far to the right with no clue as to what she is looking at. |
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02/10/2008 08:01:27 PM |
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02/09/2008 01:35:36 PM |
Like: Lighting on the left side of the face is nice, but a little harsh.
Dislike: This is more of a snapshot IMO. There is nothing that draws my attention to this photo for the eyes. The crop is too tight, the background is dull. |
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02/07/2008 11:46:37 AM |
| To much like a snapshot for me |
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02/06/2008 02:26:21 PM |
| Face and eyes are a little too dark. As a result my eye is drawn to the sticker on the wall even though it is out of focus, just because it's the brighest area of the photo. |
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02/06/2008 06:09:08 AM |
| The background is distracting, and if that is what she's supposed to be pondering it should be clearer so we can tell what it is; if not it shouldn't be there. Personally I also don't like the cropped face, but I do like how she is looking into the picture. |
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02/06/2008 12:09:12 AM |
| the background is just too distracting |
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02/05/2008 10:06:28 PM |
| The background clutter is a bit distracting as I keep trying to read it. |
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