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Moments of Timeless Pleasure™
Moments of Timeless Pleasure™
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Challenge: Advertisement III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S700 / S5700
Date: Feb 4, 2008
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/110
Galleries: Advertisement, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Feb 4, 2008

 In my opinion, chocolate sells itself, so I went for a minimalist shot...
I know it won't do well, but I don't care how the voting goes because I got to eat lots of chocolate!! :P

Editing:
Smart sharpen
Dust & Scratches
Exposure
Resize
Save for Web

Statistics
Place: 98 out of 157
Avg (all users): 5.1040
Avg (commenters): 5.1000
Avg (participants): 5.2500
Avg (non-participants): 5.0579
Views since voting: 871
Views during voting: 383
Votes: 250
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/11/2008 07:28:41 PM
simple and clear. 7
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/11/2008 05:23:08 PM
I really like the contrast between the dark and light. The picture might be a little more effective though, if you have a few pieces of chocolate (possibly with a bite taken out of one?) placed in front. Maybe that's just cos my mouth doesn't water from packages alone.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/11/2008 05:21:06 AM
Too much background, it draws away from the subject. The angle is too straight on as well, try a different angle.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/10/2008 10:09:10 PM
yes they are
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/10/2008 06:26:01 AM
this is a nice ad.Product is well displayed and place well within the comp to let text flow easily. The only pick I have is the glare from the wrapper. This might be fixed in a light tent I think. Otherwise excellent job.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/09/2008 08:39:59 PM
Too much white space for my taste.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/08/2008 03:00:47 PM
why didnt you open the giradelli, so i sould see the chocolate?
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/07/2008 06:13:06 AM
I wish you could have done something more than prop up the bar because i really love this product... It looks plain and unimaginative.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/07/2008 05:31:38 AM
I think the entire name should be able to be read on a product for an ad... good setup otherwise. Lighting is good.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/06/2008 04:33:42 PM
I think if one of the chocolates was also part of the comp it would sell better.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/06/2008 05:21:03 AM
Try something a little less boring.


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