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03/07/2008 10:22:54 AM |
This is a great comment. It is exactly the advice I would heed if I were you.
Originally posted by citymars:
What a great old entrance, and I like the concept of the girl in front, but technically there are some problems: it's not very sharp, the girl sort of disappears against the background, the upper left corner is too bright and draws the eye away from the subjects, a lot of empty space down front, plus you've got the phone wires. Maybe shot at a later time of afternoon, with a tripod and a reflector or fill flash, would bring better results (though no recommendation for the wires, unless you can cut them down). ;-) |
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02/05/2008 11:47:51 AM |
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02/05/2008 06:23:49 AM |
| This one creeps me out a little. I think I've seen horror flicks that start this way! |
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02/04/2008 12:14:40 PM |
| What a great old entrance, and I like the concept of the girl in front, but technically there are some problems: it's not very sharp, the girl sort of disappears against the background, the upper left corner is too bright and draws the eye away from the subjects, a lot of empty space down front, plus you've got the phone wires. Maybe shot at a later time of afternoon, with a tripod and a reflector or fill flash, would bring better results (though no recommendation for the wires, unless you can cut them down). ;-) |
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02/04/2008 02:40:59 AM |
| This image has a lot of good points and bad. This is a great location, with this fantastic decaying old building, and the girl is a great addition to humanise the scene. But, the powerlines and the lighting and sky colouring all let it down. |
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02/01/2008 05:21:50 AM |
| Good exposure -- you've got details in the shade and didn't blow the background out. The little girl really gives a sense of scale to the shot. |
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01/31/2008 07:53:27 AM |
| The electric lines in front of the building spoil the image a bit but it's still a very nice picture. i like how the reddish tone of the building complements the color of the sky. |
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01/31/2008 03:42:21 AM |
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01/30/2008 02:05:52 PM |
| Really cool old building. Interesting. The little girl looks so out of place. I like it! |
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01/30/2008 03:13:02 AM |
| lovely colours, crisp clean feel t it, you can feel the desolation of the place. the young girl relaly helps withthis picture too 9 |
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