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Sliding on the Curve
Sliding on the Curve
dawn_welsh


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Challenge: Off-Screen Expectation (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony Mavica CD350
Location: Shepherdstown, WV
Date: Mar 7, 2004
ISO: 200
Galleries: Family, Action
Date Uploaded: Mar 9, 2004

First warm, sunny day, first visit to the park. Just checking out all the bells and whistles on the new camera...still learning.

Statistics
Place: 133 out of 183
Avg (all users): 4.3015
Avg (commenters): 5.3000
Avg (participants): 4.0122
Avg (non-participants): 4.4333
Views since voting: 859
Votes: 262
Comments: 10
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/16/2004 06:04:27 PM
Lovely, happy picture. Such joy. However, it doesn't really make me want to know what is off screen. It is very complete and satisfying unto itself.
03/14/2004 03:46:24 PM
nice creative idea.....great crop!
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03/13/2004 09:59:39 AM
I think you cropped this a bit too close from the original image, producing a lot of "stair-stepping". Otherwise, a very nice entry in this challenge. Good luck!
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03/12/2004 08:18:01 PM
Honestly, this shot doesn't do much for me. It's cropped a litle too tight, I think. Perhaps just including the rest of her eye on the side, or something?
03/12/2004 05:07:46 AM
interesting take on the challenge...overall the photo seems too washed out
03/10/2004 06:20:22 PM
Its ok, but doesn't seem to convey any movement. The back lighting and whiteout at the top is unfortuneate. But I see what you were going for and points for that!
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03/10/2004 08:00:53 AM
You have a diffucult lightning conditions there so its probably not possible to increase the contrast. But I think that more colorsaturation would have made this image better and maybe if you had croped til more and cut out the burned out sky you could have increased the contrast.
03/10/2004 02:37:29 AM
Good idea with the photo. The image shows obvious pixelation and is slightly over-exposed in the background
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03/10/2004 01:44:23 AM
You can feel the anticipation in this. Cool.
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03/10/2004 01:41:43 AM
A nicely composed shot. However there is little implication of anything happening past the edge of the frame - the attention is drawn to the girl's face - that's where things are happening. Then i think well yes she's is so obviously anticipating the rest of the slide so perhaps this is cleverer than I thought!
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