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03/23/2004 10:38:32 AM |
Looks like only the digit is in focus. Otherwise - very good.
Message edited by HBunch - Critique Club status removed. |
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03/16/2004 06:47:53 PM |
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03/16/2004 06:32:05 PM |
| Great picture - very evocative. However, it doesn't really make one wonder what is beyond what we can see. |
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03/16/2004 09:35:43 AM |
| A bit saccharine for me... |
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03/16/2004 08:36:17 AM |
| This was the most moving photo of the pic. Love the composition. |
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03/16/2004 07:22:04 AM |
| Fabulous composition - good color, placement and use of the road. Good job! |
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03/14/2004 11:58:18 AM |
| nice photo...color is good, focus is crisp...maybe cropping the car out in the distance would have gotten better score from me anyway...however I do like this shot |
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03/14/2004 12:21:49 AM |
| lovely composition. really really nice shot. dont know about "off screen expectation" thoug since I have all the information I need on screen. |
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03/12/2004 11:43:45 PM |
| He´s on-screen, isnt he? All the same its a fine image. Focus, DOF and colors very good and seems well croped |
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03/12/2004 08:50:25 AM |
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03/12/2004 06:17:13 AM |
| nice pic. i see no expectation or implied off-frame action. |
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03/11/2004 08:49:13 AM |
| Well composed but the title reveals what is happenign off screen which reduces the effectiveness of the idea which is to be oleft with anticipation of something happening that one is uncertain of. the shot could have been improved in this regard by the use of a shallow DOF with the road and background out of focus. That would have left me with a sense of anticipation and wonder. |
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03/10/2004 11:45:31 AM |
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03/10/2004 10:49:36 AM |
| Wait for the car to leave the frame and call it "waiting for Daddy" the it's on topic. I LOVE the idea though. |
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03/10/2004 08:08:48 AM |
Good idea. I really like the composition of this picture the way that the triangle that the kid forms leads straight into the ball. That leaves the rest of the frame which again is a triangle. The lines of these shapes also create a dynamic which is reinforced by the off centre composition -- very effective.
My biggest gripe with this picture is the artefacts that you can see on the boys skin, if you look closely you will see quite a few of them. I am not sure if these are JPEG artefacts or if you Neatimaged the picture, I would have thought however that they are probably JPEG artefacts.
I would probably also prefer to have seen the car a little bit closer, but then again so what it's still a good picture. |
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03/09/2004 10:02:33 PM |
| Hi perky!! Haha. This was my choice. |
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03/09/2004 08:35:17 PM |
| 2 seconds later and you'd have a shot -- the car wouldn't be there. In this photo, I see what he is looking at -- there is nothing "off-screen" about the shot. |
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03/09/2004 07:50:26 PM |
| Nice colors, nice idea. Heartbreaking! |
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