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01/10/2008 04:17:46 AM |
Hey Jamie,
I like this photo alot. Yospiff already said it that the tree might be a bit too soft, which I agree on. I love the pose, and the composition. Dont know, I think it's a very sexy pose/photo. I like it! :D
Mike. |
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01/09/2008 06:20:28 AM |
| A very sultry looking image. The softness on the tree may be a little too much though. Especially since the eyes, lips and and bracelet are in such sharpness, it looks a little out of place. |
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01/09/2008 05:57:45 AM |
| I think the self potraits you've got in your portfolio are fine as they are.. The lighting, focus, composition is really quite good.. but the edit takes away from the naturalness of the pictures.. Trying to do more glamourous edits, with the blurring, won't work for what is an ourdoor, less contrived shot. Blurring is better for head shots, and more fashion stuff.. and the vignetting isn't as subtle as I'd like.. the black seems more obvious.. so a lighter touch would be better.. |
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01/08/2008 09:47:33 AM |
| I like the pose but the blur seems overdone and makes the image appears oof. I would decrease the vignette that you used as well. I would duplicate the background layer and add the blur to that layer, then decrease the opacity until you get the desired result. you can even change the blending modes to change the effect of the blur on the image. Hope that helps. Trevor~ |
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