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01/24/2008 01:30:24 PM |
really a nice shot, should've scored better than it did, at least a six. Probably adding some contrast here would have added something to the shot, and i really like the choice to go black and white. Great expressions as well, very nice. |
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01/13/2008 05:49:06 PM |
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01/13/2008 04:28:12 PM |
frisca: he's too old to be on the swings. that's not natural.
muckpond: dude! nice tuck and roll!
scalvert: look at that arabesque as he leaves the swing. that's not physics.
ursula: aww, but it's so pretty. |
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01/12/2008 05:17:23 PM |
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01/11/2008 09:48:55 PM |
Good idea, overall the feel is a bit flat - more contrast? |
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01/11/2008 07:51:52 AM |
Definitly brought a smile to my face :) |
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01/10/2008 07:28:00 PM |
The memories this brings me puts the biggest smile on my face and warmth in my heart. Great eye contact and fun expressions from your subject. But do boys ever need to really "revisit"? I thought they were always there... |
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01/10/2008 10:58:32 AM |
I like that your subject is moving to the left out of the frame (which to me represents moving back to the past - childhood!) Great shot, what an exuberant subject! 9 |
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01/10/2008 07:54:05 AM |
this would be better if the figure on the left was either all there or not there at all. 7 |
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01/10/2008 06:22:19 AM |
great photo! i can clearly see the progression over time. seeing a grownup having so much fun makes me smile. |
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01/09/2008 12:53:04 PM |
I can so see myself doing this. My only nitpick is the one of you all the way back can be seen through, as if it was part of a long-exposure. |
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01/08/2008 11:03:18 AM |
Man I like it . I think catching the fall is pretty awesome. |
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01/08/2008 07:54:49 AM |
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01/08/2008 07:18:14 AM |
I just know you'll forgive me for saying this is corny as all get out, but a great sequence, thanks for the fun... |
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01/08/2008 04:49:48 AM |
Lack of shadows is a bit odd and some positions are sharper than others. Might have been more consistent (spacing wise) to have just one position on the backswing rather than 2. Other than that, good B&W conversion and use of the wide aspect ratio frame |
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01/07/2008 11:32:27 PM |
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01/07/2008 06:27:45 PM |
Great job. And it looks like it was fun too. |
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01/07/2008 06:23:26 PM |
Bet this one is causing heads to spin. Is it all one motion? Is it a swing, a jump and a roll? Oh the humanity. |
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01/07/2008 05:04:18 PM |
WOOOO!!!! I hope some stranger was watching this. Nice capture and you nailed the landing roll. |
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01/07/2008 02:09:20 PM |
Perfectly entertaining! Very well done. Back to bump you up to 9 for bringing a huge smile to my face. (Not as huge as your models' but pretty big none-the -less!). : ) Such a fun shot! |
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01/07/2008 08:30:47 AM |
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01/07/2008 08:06:53 AM |
thats looks like fun, I like how the action goes all the way through the frame |
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01/07/2008 07:11:34 AM |
I like it. Looks like it was a fun shoot. I like the balck and white. Only thing I don't like it is looks soft to me. The frame at the rear could have been omitted. You have some serious potential on this shot, I think the aperture just need to be opened up a bit more to get mor ein focus.
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01/07/2008 06:33:54 AM |
love the motion and tension/release of tension in the chains of the swing. 9 |
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01/07/2008 04:26:54 AM |
ROFL! Did anyone see you doing this? Nice job! |
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01/06/2008 11:12:26 PM |
When composing a photographe always try to ensure that the background doesn't compete with your main attraction, especially when using b/w which relies on contrast to pick out the main elements. The swing in this image is lost in the trees, as are the first 5 steps. Needs work on composition. |
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01/06/2008 08:11:52 PM |
LOL - what fun! I love the smile on the middle guy. The image needs some brightening, though. See how the snow almost matches the gray DPC background? Try setting exposure compensation to +1 when shooting on snow or sand or other very bright backgrounds. |
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01/06/2008 07:50:56 PM |
Great idea - nice sequence! |
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