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03/08/2004 04:05:42 AM |
The subject itself is great - but I think the image lacks punch. Being so far away (and thus including trees, foreground etd) doesn't really add anything, I think going closer might be better.
I'm also most intrigued by the snow-covered tyres and think a photo of those would be striking. |
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03/07/2004 12:54:19 PM |
| On the right side, the house is distracting. Cropping at the trees(as you did on the left) would help that. The tradeoff is obviously loosing the empty bench which makes this look even more silent. A little more detail on the playgound equipment would have helped a little too, even at the expense of blowing out the sky a bit. |
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03/06/2004 09:52:08 PM |
| Angle is slightly off... otherwise nice shot |
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03/06/2004 03:19:35 AM |
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03/05/2004 06:32:32 AM |
| The impression you create is very nice. Could have improved by slight rotation CW. |
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03/03/2004 12:17:55 PM |
| you've done a nice job of telling a story. I'd suggest leveling the picture and fuzzing out the background to isolate your composition - perhaps b&w because the only bit of color is in the backdrop. |
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03/03/2004 11:01:43 AM |
| the picture is not level. |
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03/03/2004 04:03:47 AM |
| I don't think the playground really stands out in the image, maybe closer or a different angle could have helped? |
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03/02/2004 08:16:59 PM |
| the horizontal is cropped croocked... , allright shot... |
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