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02/29/2004 08:28:39 PM |
Thank you folks for the comments and voting. I agree, the blinds are a bit distracting. I wasn't really think about that when I shot it. I was seeing them as a way to enhance a mundane object. I could of tilt more to the right to balance the photo out now that I see it. Perhaps I shot at that angle due to the lighting from outside. I can't remember. However, It was a nice design attempt to make something mundane look interesting. I have learned a lot from this one. This shot looks better after I had made it more into and abstract art piece in Photoshop. Looks much better that a normal photo. |
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02/29/2004 06:49:03 PM |
I like this picture. If you could have hidden the electrical cord more I think it would improve the shot. |
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02/29/2004 02:25:04 PM |
nice shot, Im sure you have heard this , but I wish it was straighter |
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02/28/2004 03:15:11 PM |
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02/28/2004 02:27:38 PM |
This is such a cool shot but you missed one important thing. It's tiled to the right. The shutters make this even more painfully clear. :( |
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02/28/2004 09:32:04 AM |
Engaging use o flines and composition here! Clarity suffers slightly, but still a nice photo. 8 |
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02/28/2004 07:59:25 AM |
Shade distracts too much ... otherwise good. |
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02/28/2004 07:07:56 AM |
The blinds are distracting to me as they are, sloping down to the right. I like the idea. |
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02/28/2004 04:55:10 AM |
Interesting shot, nice reflections and lighting. |
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02/28/2004 03:20:05 AM |
I like the lighting and coloring on the lamp. The horizontal blinds are a little annoying to the eye, though. |
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02/26/2004 02:40:03 AM |
More clarity in the silver lamp head would really make this shot sparkle. |
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02/25/2004 04:43:48 AM |
Good tonal range, all metal and light. Perhaps it would be better to line the lines in the drapes/curtains(?) up with the frame, the bended lines are a bit distracting. |
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02/23/2004 07:07:03 PM |
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02/23/2004 11:40:48 AM |
Nice composition to this..Ilike the way the table reflection carries the blinds right down through the picture. good work. |
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02/23/2004 05:50:05 AM |
Fix the bent blind and would have bee a good capture, the blind is a distractor that takes away from your image |
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02/23/2004 05:27:33 AM |
Good reflection of the blinds on the tabletop. |
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02/23/2004 04:41:08 AM |
Mundane no doubt. Compostionally, I find that the mini blinds are very distracting. A plain black background or a backlit white background would have worked better in my opinion. |
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02/23/2004 04:30:32 AM |
Love it! Composition and color balance is great. Clean and elegant. |
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