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09/29/2002 04:58:00 PM |
Initial=wow!
Composition=well done! is it me, or does the land tilt down from right to left. I see how you made the bridge angle, but with that and the curve of the sidewalk and water, I think it is a bit slanted. Anyway.. love the curve of the sidewalk and water in relation to the linear bridge.
Clarity (focus, details)=perfect!
Exposure=perfect!
Interesting or Emotive=lots for my eye to do in this image. Great!
I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks
autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments.
Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0)
kpb
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09/29/2002 09:57:00 AM |
| You got one of my many 10's this week perfect shot. |
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09/29/2002 05:54:00 AM |
| The focus on the bridge seems to be slightly off. Might be haze, I can't tell. The grass and curving walk make it an 8 for me. nards656 |
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09/28/2002 05:40:00 PM |
| God, I've been there so many times. I'm all nostalgic... I lived in Sydney for 4.5 years. This just needed some rotating in the clockwise direction to straighten up that horizon, or perhaps a little bit in the other direction to make it seem more jaunty, otherwise it's just a bit awkward. Nicely framed otherwise. |
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09/27/2002 07:13:00 PM |
| two things I would wish for here--treetop not cut off and a little sky visable above all the buildings that are under the bridge. A 10 never the less. |
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09/26/2002 10:58:00 AM |
| love the colors and detail. |
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09/26/2002 08:43:00 AM |
| Excellent composition. The colors are vibrant and the bridge pulls you right into the picture. |
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09/25/2002 08:20:00 PM |
| Reasonably well ocmposed, although I'd like to see the top of the palm tree. Nice colors. I like the curved fence. 5 sjgleah |
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09/25/2002 07:43:00 PM |
| I feel like I'm tilting all over the place - needs a flater horizon. Wish I could see the top of the tree as well - reminds me of when I climbed this last year. |
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09/25/2002 06:53:00 PM |
| Good vividness, although it may have been better to include the top of the tree. |
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09/25/2002 04:00:00 PM |
| Very nice curves and perspective. The top of the palm tree cut bothers me a little. but the bridge and path curves are VERY appealing. 7. Lionel |
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09/25/2002 03:59:00 PM |
| Looks very pretty but the horizon is a bit off, i feel seasick :) It's a good composition though, the curves of the rive/fence + the bridge. If I were taking this photo, i'd move closer and try to get some of the city into the photo, but that's just me. 7 paganini |
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09/25/2002 12:02:00 PM |
| real pretty. nice shadows of the fence on the walk. only way it could be better is maybe show the top of the palm tree, or wait for somebody to come walking down towards the foreground. maybe a hot chick. |
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09/25/2002 05:10:00 AM |
| great shot ... but I would've took it from a slightly lower angle to show the rest of the tall building and and palm tree |
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09/24/2002 06:35:00 PM |
| Nice interplay of lines. JEM |
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09/24/2002 01:09:00 PM |
| I really like this view... the leading line created by the sidewalk is a very nice touch :) - setzler |
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09/24/2002 11:09:00 AM |
| Very nice. Great composition and color. |
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09/24/2002 10:02:00 AM |
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09/24/2002 05:06:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background9,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing8,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9,
Total Averaged Rating9. Autool
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09/24/2002 04:12:00 AM |
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09/24/2002 01:32:00 AM |
| Nice shot of a cityscape, with some other stuff in the foreground. adds a little balance to the composition. |
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09/23/2002 03:18:00 PM |
| i love the swooping lines of the walk and arch... my only complaints: the horizon needs to be straight and all of the closest palm should be in the pic (in my opinion) because it's cut off in mid-swoop...7 |
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09/23/2002 02:52:00 PM |
| I wondering where this is, very pretty. Nice color. Dpz |
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09/23/2002 12:43:00 PM |
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09/23/2002 10:14:00 AM |
| Nice work, nice color, perspective, light. Good luck. Justine |
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09/22/2002 10:00:00 PM |
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09/22/2002 09:36:00 PM |
| Very nice subject! I would have liked it better if the entire palm tree had been kept, but still ver nice-looking place. |
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