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11/13/2007 03:18:27 PM |
| Nice portrait. Begging for some contrast. |
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11/13/2007 01:27:45 PM |
| Lovely young lady. The angle of the light makes it come across quite harshly; coming in from one side might make for a more interesting picture. |
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11/12/2007 10:34:39 PM |
| Indoor flash always produces harsh unsightly shadows on the backdrop. Could have pushed the tonal range harder at the bottom end and given its mono, could have clipped the tonal extremes to make for a more dramatic image |
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11/12/2007 12:51:29 AM |
| Cute girl but the light seems to be coming from more than one source. And the contrast is just not there. |
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11/10/2007 03:06:17 PM |
There's a very large shadow behind your model. Don't be afraid to move your furniture further from the wall.
There's also no true blacks or whites in the photo, which is causing it to look very flat to me. I use Curves in Photoshop to make sure I have whites and blacks set to create the best depth. With this photo I used the black eyedropper in Curves to make the blacks blacker. Doing this made your subject pop right out of the background. |
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11/08/2007 11:10:30 AM |
| The flash has created a harsh shadow on the background. |
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11/07/2007 08:52:29 AM |
| The shadow cast from the flash is distracting. Also I thinks this could use a contrast increase as there is a lot of similar grey tones which should be spread more evenly across the black- white range. On the plus side it's a nice pose and composition. |
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11/07/2007 06:08:19 AM |
| Nice portrait but not single light source |
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11/07/2007 12:05:01 AM |
| While Bethany is gorgeous, Flash leavesa distracting shadow in the background and the contrast is low...sorry :-( |
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11/06/2007 09:35:39 PM |
| Should have bounced the light instead of a direct flash shot |
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