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02/20/2004 08:43:11 PM |
The lighting or colors or something just doesn't seem right here. I'm not sure what it is, there just isn't anything distinct in this photo |
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02/20/2004 06:28:33 PM |
This looks slightly out of focus. |
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02/20/2004 11:12:54 AM |
Not a real interesting shot. Too far out to appreciate the texture of the weave. |
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02/20/2004 09:17:19 AM |
Another contrasting background colour, and a bit better focus would help improve this image. |
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02/20/2004 08:56:04 AM |
Ok here it goes...The bottom left hand corner really need to be cropped out. A picture of just the wicker hat would've been fine. My eyes keep going o the left blurry part. |
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02/20/2004 06:53:05 AM |
This is a apretty good take on the challenge. It could be a bit sharper. The monochromatic technique isn't quite perfect for this subject. A bit of interest, perhaps a pin or flower would also work well with this image. I like the way you composed the shot. |
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02/20/2004 03:15:46 AM |
a bigger dof would let me feel the texture more |
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02/20/2004 02:28:08 AM |
It's ok but not grabbing in any way. A title would help ;)
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02/19/2004 07:46:00 PM |
Nice contrast in textures. |
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02/19/2004 07:38:42 PM |
Soft focus detracting from appearance of texture. |
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02/19/2004 10:52:46 AM |
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02/19/2004 07:45:22 AM |
The texture is here. The subject and composition lack interest to me. |
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02/18/2004 11:43:22 PM |
Little variation in light across the in-focus areas of the hat - leaves little impression of the feel of the surface. The out of focus line of the brim where it curls up really pulls the eye, to poor effect I fear. There is far more texture visible in the extreme top right of frame, but your composition has relegated that area so far that it barely registers without a deliberate search. |
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02/18/2004 07:48:05 PM |
Looks like a straw hat. I like the textures, however, the out of focus edge really cuts throught the photo for me. because it's the only thing that is of soft focus, it really draws my attention and I find myself looking at it more than at the texture of the hat. I like the colors and the lighting seems good. I also like where you have placed it within the frame. ~Heather~ |
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02/18/2004 10:34:01 AM |
Maybe if the whole picture was a little sharper, but good luck anyway! |
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